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| BananaXPancakes 2008-08-16 ch 1,  | abuseAww cute, I loved it, great job. :) |
| xXxKissMeKatexXx 2007-12-05 ch 1, | abuseaw that was cute! |
| KeDe 2007-10-25 ch 1, | abuseI like the fact that you tried to do something original here (love that)and didn't use too much from an actual episode (hate that). However, sorry to be the dissenting voice here, but I just don't see Brenda acting that loopy over love in front of her colleagues whose respect she's worked so hard to earn. I too like Provenza but definitely think he would have to be draged out because he'd want to hang around and try to hear the lovebirds in action. Remember the episode where Brenda forgot she was wearing a microphone and Provenza enjoyed eavesdropping on her? It would have been interesting to see Flynn's and Sanchez' reactions (they'd be into it, too). Daniels and Pope were on target. You got Fritzy down pat. It's hard to believe he's an FBI agent. |
| Shakayla 2007-07-14 ch 1, | abuseThat was a very nice story, indeed. I, too, have grown to love The Closer...been thinking about dabbling in some fic myself! Looking forward to some more stories from you!! You definitely have the characters down...you just gotta love Provenza!! |
| Hips 2007-07-05 ch 1, | abuseThis was such a fantastic piece! You definitely need to write more Closer fic! It was true to the characters and feel of the show, but it also had a fantastic plot for shippers. (Good Lord, how I love those crazy kids together) Anyways, you have a lovely way with words and I look forward to reading more from you. Hint hint. |
| Koneka-Guardian 2007-07-02 ch 1, | abuse*giggles* I like. Nice for a first time Closer fic! ~Koneka |
| Gamine Madcap 2007-06-29 ch 1, | abuseAw...that was precious! we totally need more Closer fanfic. and the great thing is that this is totally believable--I can definetely see Fritz having this great big proposal plan, and then have to blow it cause of her work and end up proposing by accident. hehehe...men are funny. keep up the great work! |