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ellensin787
2009-11-11 . chapter 1
aww you know a sequel would be cool...maybe even...super cool
bellachaos
2009-09-16 . chapter 1
Cute story. I'm not sure how I feel about Harry the neurotic drug addict, but you more than made up for it with Hermione the overstressed dance teacher.
frozenpixie
2009-05-04 . chapter 1
Absolutely loved it, you dealt with the mobile phone thing really well. Loved Ron/Luna and neurotic Harry too xx
the doctor's next dance
2009-01-29 . chapter 1
I loved that! :D

"This seemed to snap Oliver out of his slump, but it had the effect of also startling Harry, who twitched violently and fumbled for his pills again."

Your characterisation of Harry as a pill-popping nervous wreck was hilarious, and I loved the alternative endings you gave the characters, with their new careers. Why did JK never consider making Potter into a male stripper!? :P

The texting idea was brilliant, and I loved the conclusion to the story. Thanks for sharing! :)
princessinct
2009-01-08 . chapter 1
Enjoyed your little fic.
Wish the story continued just a bit longer. Maybe there's a sequel on its way?
At any rate, thanks for the entertainment.
ISmellOfDragonsBlood
2009-01-03 . chapter 1
I liked it : )

My favorite line was: She seriously hoped it wasn’t Harry, sending her another message about how he needed a ride to his therapists

lol
Atomic Elf
2008-09-27 . chapter 1
I love it so far! It's very original and well-written. Good job!
Readerforlife
2008-06-16 . chapter 1
loved it :]
yume142
2008-05-23 . chapter 1
I like this fic.. The way you describe the whole situation in a smooth tone and a hilarious way as well. Like Harry's character and Hermione.. Sure they have quite a few out of character moments but that is what I like about this fic.. Not too much of the character is thrown away but there are still some changes..

And the ending I think is perfect... Them not exactly having attraction right from the start.. Like the instant connection which a lot has been put up.. but a gradual way of how they meet again and the hope of something later on.. I like the casual way of going about how they caught up with each other..

Simple.. Well written and a great ending.. ^_^\/
Secret Thought
2008-04-19 . chapter 1
Aww, don't we get to read about their date? lol.. :] Loved the story.
sm
2008-04-01 . chapter 1
Very funny story!
Evelyns Journey
2008-03-13 . chapter 1
Your EVIL! No details? No Mad passionate love making? HAHA I'm just joking, had to say it because you mentioned Oliver thinking that about Katie... who is gay... what a twist! That was absolutely brilliant! You should have a sequel!

Got to love Cell phones... Sometimes

Great one shot!
CT1994
2008-01-28 . chapter 1
LOL, harry being portrayed as an perpetual paranoid saviour of the wizarding world, is hilarious!
mandigrrl
2008-01-17 . chapter 1
completely loved it. too bad there wasn't more!
KristyT23
2008-01-09 . chapter 1
Ha. I loved the texting. Very cute.
Harry and his problems are hillarious. That made this story awesome.
Hermione and Oliver are really cute together. I wish you'd write another chapter to see how their get together goes.
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