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androgynous1001
2009-09-15 . chapter 9
“Saya, please don’t die,” he was crying.

I shall said, "Oh boy~"
BrokenForgotenButStillHere
2009-06-13 . chapter 17
Hmm.. lemme list off the things i did today.
Woke up.
Argue with my lil bro.
Got on the computer.
Got on fanfiction and found your first story.
Read until I was finished with them all.
Hehehe wow I have never had the motive to read a trilogy of fanfics..hell a trilogy of any work of literature during the summer. And I did it in one day woot! I wonder though 'Karl' was not Karl but a clone..did the clone know that he was not the original? Odd yes this is a review over all 3 of the book things. That tad bit confused me but who cares clone or not way to go making Saya more insane than she already is XD. I also noticed that you spelled Karl C-a-r-l a majority of the time what's up with that? I believe in the anime how they always spelled Karl is how I just spelled it XD. Even on the site they spell Karl with a K not a C. Anyways love your stories You are an awsome writer...now then >.> *looks over* <.< *looks again* Imma go read your other stories hehe Yays yaoi hehe.
~Ayame
P.S. yes you are a sadistic bitch..but so am I. Way to go ^_^
Lullabyes
2008-12-18 . chapter 1
This story both intrigues and disturbs me...(I'm not easy to disturb, so great job.) A KarlxSaya pairing really would be believable if it was in this sort of light. Nice job keeping Karl in-character, and telling an interesting story besides. ;)
Battygirl
2008-08-22 . chapter 16
Aww! I LOVE the ending! So sweet! But...refresh my memory...who was Hakumei in THIS story again? Scammy forget...

Anywho, it was an awesome ending!! I'm glad I was finally able to read it!! ;)
trunks lover
2008-08-20 . chapter 17
no i am watching the anime now and i already cried because of your story i know that the anime is sad and will make me cry for i have seen it before. please if you want write it but make it somewhat happy please. i hate the saddness of the show and the sadness of the fics that i read. you are an asome authoress.
OathkeeperRoxasXNamine09
2008-08-20 . chapter 16
So let me get this straight, everyone except the twins are dead. Best Fanfic ever, I like it,b ut i only killed all main characters in a story me and my pal bryan did, but they cam back to life. that was back in 2006. Hey, In my SSB story. the Blood plus cast are in it, check it out. Also, my Blood plus story is at chapter 7, leave a review when you get a chance.
trunks lover
2008-08-20 . chapter 16
you ended it almost like the anime ended. I want to cry. please make more to the haji X saya storyline. well thank you for writing such a wonderful trilogy, it was amazing please continue with the good writing
Itachi'sNailPolish
2008-07-18 . chapter 15
YES. AND NOW I WILL WAIT FOR THE HAPPY ENDING. >;D
Battygirl
2008-07-15 . chapter 15
Aw dat's so sweet! Good chapter! YAY! I'm slap-happy right now...I'll tell you why in a real email...
Battygirl
2008-03-28 . chapter 14
Sorry, we were moving earlier. I LOVED the update! But I'm sure you knew I would! ;)
OathkeeperRoxasXNamine09
2008-03-28 . chapter 14
I can't think what to say, except, why has Saya felt defeat to the guy who took everything from her, and why kill Diva and Matthew off, can you tell me?

Also, check ot my Blood Plus story if get the chance, leave a reveiw too.
Anonymousness
2008-01-16 . chapter 13
C’mon, I would love to see where this story goes. In my interpretation, your series makes a very interesting and thought provoking statement on psychological power and control in romantic and/or sexual relationships. It casts a new, and somewhat uncomfortably honest light on the nature of love in general. I also find your implications on the definition of torture to be fascinating. You have skillfully blurred the line between both love and hate as well as power and powerlessness. Very well done, I hope to read more!
ohxasphyxiationx
2007-12-25 . chapter 4
I just joined because I needed to tell you that i am HAUNTED by this amazing tale. I've read all three pieces of the story within the last three days and I must say I am DYING for more. Usually I am not a fan of CarlXSaya but I have to say that I love this! It's made my holiday special. Imagine me, reading throughout Xmas eve trying desperately to finish! Please post again soon. I'd love it if there was just one more HagiXSaya lemon scene but this is your creative masterpiece and I have no complaints about it thus far. Only criticism I can give you is to revise this last piece of the trilogy. Some slight typos. Oh well.

Thanks so much for righting this and I hope you had a wonderful Holiday!!

=D Dying to see what you come up with next!
-Liz.
RJ Dancel
2007-12-12 . chapter 13
Hey, don't abandon this story. =(
Please continue this.
I really like this trilogy, its really good.
I don't know if you are busy still or not, but if you can please continue this.
theonenameleft
2007-11-17 . chapter 13
"My name is Hagi. But you can call me Carl," WHAT?
That is mean.
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