that was really sweet, although ashe is an only child.

GASP YOU WROTE SOMETHING NEW AND DID NOT TELL ME! This was so amazingly awesome, the dialogue with Balthier wittling away her defenses was superb (I shall steal your dialogue writing abilities someday!) And oh, oh, the wedding rings. You slay me. PLUS it's Murder by Death! I love Murder by Death! :D :D


RAWR RAWR RAWR!!

Ah, finally! Some good BalthierxAshe fic! Am I the only one who likes that pairing? It's so hard to find decent stories of them but this one hit the notch. Well characterised, I could see and hear them!... More please?

Would it be awful of me to say that I find the image of an elegantly dancing Balthier quite sexy indeed? Haha. This is great, really well written and extremely enjoyable. Favourited, of course!

"Think of me as your lord husband", eh Balthier? He won't take no for an answer, will he?

Needless to say, loved it :)

The whole thing was great, but that last paragraph...

Woow.

That was lovely. The perfect thing to wake up to.