very nicely written :) sigh sometimes i felt kinda bad for poor eruru :P oh well :D i firmly believe that hakuroru returned at that last scene of the anime!

aw! so sweet! FINALLY! an Utawareomono FF! yes! so happy. Great job! Aw! YAy! i should write one...when? idk -_-

ok bye!

aww! how sweet! this is the first fanfic i've ever read for Utawarerumono...heck, i can't even pronounce Utawarerumono! but this was awesome! i almost cried for Eruru...of course afterwards i remembered the drinking incident with Oboro and the twins...hehe...sorry...i loved it!

Have you seen the full series yet? Either way, this fic is put together rather well. I look forward to seeing more Utawarerumono fics, so thanks for being first!

P.S. Don't watch the series dubbed! I have the fansubs, and the dub is worthless.

good one-shot! The first Utawarerumono fanfiction until now! But... so small hehe. But please keep the work up!

After I saw the whole anime I got the empty feeling and I wanted more. So here I came to see if people felt the same way and started doing continuations. But alas, they didn't lol

So I guess I will do one continuation for Eruru and Hakouro sake! Such a cute couple and they only kissed in the end. Bah, I don't like the end much, but I have great ideas.

Good luck!

I'm very glad to see that people are starting to write stories for this series. I may try my hand at one or two eventually myself. Thanks for this, and keep going!

this is cool i just wish it were a bit longer... _ keep up the good work!

Oh my... that was so well written! Thanks so much for sharing!

To me you've captured her thoughts very well. It seems as though you wrote this thinking of the first few chapters of utawarerumono's story. And you did a wonderfull job doing it.

great stuff about a great anime. I look forward to anymore works in this area.

how sweet of eruru. It just sound like her. I love this pairing and hopefully i see more of this in the future. Thanks.

yay! wow, the first utawarerumono fanfic here!

I like it, and its so true about eruru having to always care for hakuoro.

I love utawarerumono! thankyou for making one!

it was good, pleas make more. :D

OMG! The first fic! I love this anime, by sadly, I suck at writing_ So I'll look forward to ur future works_

Adios,

Lord " Harru" Rasler

haha, the first one, awesome,

maybe expand on this oneshot? relive the series through dear Eruru's eyes?

all up to you of course P

btw, I like the emphasis through italics, dunno, seems to make it much more personal, who knows

-Improv