i rather liked that story! who would've thought Saavedro liked PEZ so much.. :)

LOL me loves Sirrus too :3
the PEZ thing is funny!

holy son of a squee! XD
this is so funny and awesome!

LOL that was pretty much my reaction to tha part of Exile, too. do i look anything like Atrus?! No..

Thanks,I needed a good laugh!

And although the story is over and the game long since finished, just remember... you'll always have PEZ.

snerk

lol lol lol
One of the craziest Myst endings ever!

lol I love the totally dramatic and emotionnal moment: the giving of the Pez dispenser, of course. You need adequate, intense strings in the music at that point -like, "I can never forget you now... boohoo" XD
Very nice short story, Saavedro-ish and delirious, just the way I love it! ;-)
More please!

XD

You know what?? I think this is my favorit chapter! -so far-
I just couldn't stop laughing, the picture of it all is so vivid in my mind... XD
Wow ,It looks like we've got two Pez addicts instead of one, now, have we?...
Favorite quote ever:
-What are you doing with those?
-I... uh... I'm eating them?
ROFL- no seriousy-
and that pepsi-root beer combo too ,and... and...- ah well, off to next chapter! XP *can't wait*

Bwahaha, annoying each other between brothers/sisters is irresistible. And Sirrus and Achenar are contaminating, anyway, so since they do, we all do.

I love the "hello to the ground part, too! XD

Aw...it's over? :( ...but I want more!

Well, keep writing, that was hilarious! :D

Hey dude, 'tis I :)

All I know is, he’s got something against Atrus. Just like Sirrus and Achenar had something against Atrus, and Ghen had something against Atrus. Cripes, how is it that he’s still alive? HAHAH you know, now that I think about it, you're right XD XD

I gotta go find that PEZ dispenser now, lol. I was planning on replaying Exile again soon anyway to see if I can find all the easter eggs.

*dies laughing*

That was the funniest thing that I've ever read. EVER. C'mon continue! Please? Please?

A PEZ addict! lol I luv the idea to go over all the easter eggs like that.
You know, this is starting to look like some kind of intrigue... I mean, there's suspense here! I want to know! XD
(he he, Saavedro the PEZ-addicted exile who didn't like gape flavour... XD Maybe the fog comes from the PEZ! Maybe it IS a drug!)
Still hilarious, can't wait for the rest!

Aw, you dedicated it to me! ^^ Thanks!!

lol I just love those little chapters of yours, it always makes me snort aloud... Yeah, Saavedro must have lost braincells on that one. Specially since, as know, that book *can* hurt... XD

Exile + midnight + sugar = havoc.
One has to try that someday, so. XD

Yeah, I've been wondering why everyone kept mistaking us for other people in Myst games. In Myst I, Achenar already mistaked us for his brother...

The Exile easter eggs! ^^
I like that idea... (I don't like those eggs, though! I mean, they look so fun to see, but I can't get my computer to show them to me. Except for the Cathran phtograph and the pez dispenser... :( I so wanted to see the wristwatch, and the head-banging on the Releeshahn book...)

I don't think it matters that the chapters are short. It is a choice like another, and I feel it is part of the style ;)
Nice job! I really laughed out loud...