 enchantedsleeper 2009-07-03 . chapter 3It makes me extremely sad that I'll never read the rest of this story, because from what I've read so far it's fascinating, compelling and original. For what it's worth, Theodore strikes me as being the Spectator, but I could be way off the mark, without the others to try and judge by process of elimination. |
 Callista252 2009-06-09 . chapter 3hei,
i hope you will continue this story, i'm intrigued... are the girls milicent bulstrode and daphne greengrass?
cally |
 xcustard.piex 2007-10-28 . chapter 3Hmm, I would guess Pansy Parkinson but that seems a bit too obvious like Malfoy.
Perhaps Millicent Bulstrode?
Update soon. ^.^
x Bella. |
 princesspeach13 2007-09-05 . chapter 3I have no bloody idea what is going on but I am very intrigued. Good job so far. |
 Strangely Sirius 2007-07-25 . chapter 3An interesting story... I'm intrigued to see where it ends up, because it has an enormous amount of potential. I hope the arrival of Deathly Hallows hasn't killed it. |
 Goddess of Purple Squirrels 2007-07-17 . chapter 3Hunh.
Always wondered.
Beautiful.
Absolutly.
And I thought the Infiniti was a car... |
 Goddess of Purple Squirrels 2007-07-17 . chapter 1...
Holy. Bloody.
Cow.
The circus metaphor?
Hypnotizing. I don't think I'm going to be sane for a while... |
 sarcasticrules 2007-07-12 . chapter 3I think he's the . . . acrobat lol I think he's the spectator |
 Ravenwood240 2007-07-01 . chapter 3Wow... This is a far cry from most of your work, and I am impressed so far.
Keep it up, and I would say the other three are Blaise, Tracy and Pansy. |
 -ShIvErInG sMiLe- 2007-06-30 . chapter 3I haven't read any new fics for a while but this...I know it's worthy of my time and lecture. Very interesting so far. I really enjoy the style. |
 realfanficts 2007-06-30 . chapter 3Whew! I'd hate to see that guy's psych profile. I reamain hooked on this story. Now...
My guess is that Nott is probably the Illusionist, though I cannot offer a rational explanation as to my reasoning. It's more of a hunch, anyway.
Pansy Parkinson and Milicent Bulstrode are possibilities for the others, as is Marcus Flint. Those are the only Slytherin names I can recall off-hand without consulting the books. |
 Jubileyn 2007-06-30 . chapter 3Theodore's past is... I can't describe it really. As a writer, I appreciate it. As a human... it rather makes me inclined to give the boy a hug, though heaven knows he doesn't need one.
I have no idea who the other three are. I'm only wondering if you'll use a few of the more forgotten Slytherins, like Tracey Davis. But I am still intrigued. Which I guess is a good thing. |
 Jubileyn 2007-06-30 . chapter 2'...clinging to them like dew so that they frizz out and encircle our heads in a tangled halo of lethargy.'
What a phrase. Very chill-inspiring. It's like you've captured the thoughts and feelings of so many and expressed them in a way no one else could begin to pull off. Intriguing. |
 Jubileyn 2007-06-30 . chapter 1wOw. The beginning is amazing, especially the figurative language (all the similes were very compelling). But you had me at the summary- a Slytherin story is just what I'm looking for if it's coming from a superb author like you. =D |
 spamseller-fenderson 2007-06-30 . chapter 3Holly,
Thank you. I really love this piece. I will say that the effect of the spelling change has been to heighten the effect of the prologue for me. This chapter sent chills. The poor lad being cared for more by the house elves than his own father, and the seemingly damaged emotions are very disturbing. I would have liked to see a little more from him in way of responses to the sorting hat, but I can also see the effectiveness of the way you have it written.
My guesses: Theo is either illusionist or spectator. I could make arguments for either, but I am leaning more toward illusionist, as Nott seems to be hiding his emotions even from himself.
As to the other characters, I am guessing that Ms. Millicent Bulstrode will be one of them. I would venture to say that Zabini is a vague possibility, but not particularly likely given the clues you gave and his greater involvement in HBP.
Spamseller/Dark/Charles |