Aww! Cute.

I personally prefer a False Ending. Mercedes facing Darkova/Ingway. It's a very touching cutscene afterword.

I loved it so much i didn't want it to be over :(

You know...

You could do an alternative ending in the other chapter where they DO get together ;)

Hehe, i love that couple

Aww...cute! >W<
I love Mercedes and Ingway. ^-^
Mercedes was my favorite character to play in the game...
I was so mad at the True Ending...
...
WAAH!!
I don't wanna remember...!
DX
-sniff-
Anyway, I loved your fanfic. ^-^
I really wished that Mercedes and Ingway ended up together in the game...
But your fanfic makes me feel better. I feel all warm and fuzzy inside...and it makes me wanna roll around. XD -which is good-
...
I feel happy now~ ^-^ ^-^ ^-^ ^-^ ^-^

Darn I love this fic! But right now I'm in Oswald's story in the Ringhorn Mountains so I dont know how everything will turn out in the end I just hope its not to tragic, but even so I hope there will be a sequel to this!

Beautifully done :D I love your characterization of Mercedes - it's right on the dot, and what's more, it fits in perfectly with her character, while adding a touch of joviality to your fanfic. Your descriptions of her thoughts, and her trying to "look a little more like a queen and less like a homeless wanderer" had me chuckling quietly to myself - you did very well at emphasizing Mercedes's immaturity, and her loneliness without her Frog Prince.

Heh-heh, I'm not so sure why you mentioned the serenading of the frogs, though. To me, it doesn't seem like it has much relevance to the story, though it was very entertaining indeed.

An easy favorite, what with the definite lack of grammatical or spelling errors, and a flowing style which is easy to follow. I look forward to reading more of your works! (I think I've probably read all your Odin Sphere works already O_OU)
~Crazylobo

Squee! That was absolutely ADORABLE!! ^_^ Mercedes is one of my favorite characters too. Ingway watching over her was way too cute! I wish that they'd get together in the end! I don't know yet, though, because I'm on Velvet's book. But I loved your story!

This is too cute! What are you doing?! Go write the next chapter! Heehee. Seriously though, this fanfic that you've written on them is really cute. It had me giggling at the end... I don't giggle.

Aww, very cute! I love how you described Mercedes; she is indeed quite the funny one. ^_^ Keep up the good work!

This is a very beautiful story, and yet it is so sad too. I love the fact that Ingway is still watching over Mercedes, and at the same time causing them both pain because he won't reveal himself. Anyhow..right now I am on Velvet's story, and Ingway certainly acts alot more evil then he does in Mercedes book.Odin is a pain, but I am sure you'll beat him. Looking froward to some more stories from you.