Is this an au? Is it just a two shot? I really really hope It is not a two shot and you keep going and change the story so Edward goes back to bells! It was amazing, both of the chapters. I really hope you write some more!

ok, you certainly know how to capture emotions in words.
Loving it. Reading those 2 chapters made me tear up inside. Ok, I sound like a freak xD. Just ignore my review.
BUT HEY; WELL DONE !

this is so amazingly awesome, i love reading edward pov's. and this by far is the very absolute best, i am begging you now, please, please PLEASE write anothe like this or placed after this, it is so amazingly good i want to cry, you have so much talents i can feel it radiate through the computer. PLEASE WRITE MORE LIKE THIS!

Aww! I am almost in tears. That was amazing!

aw poor bella
lucky she has such a great friend in Angela although you should do a spin off and write some revenge ff against lauren lol
keep up the good writing

i love this perspective of edward
keep up the good writing

Harsh o i say again harsh cliffy again lovely story though

You took my breath away with this! I love it, and it made me very sad... Thank you for sharing this with us!

ok, with this one you almost made me cry. they do come together in this one don't they?

very sad it made me cry. Too bad that this was only a one shot. So sad...poor Edward. Poor Bella... I wanted to smak both of them on the head for being idiots!Hello? they can't see that the other loves them more than they can imagine. Ugh!
sorry, really sorry about my rant. Loved every word of it.
-Shadow

is the story actually complete or did you just mis-label it

This was so great... OMG! You have me on the edge of my sit...

Jennifer

cool

omg please update soon!

NO8O!



Why don't you write more?

I don't like it when people end their most frekin amazing storys without preparing us poor, poor readers.

Write More!

Luv, Katy