Yes! Continue! Please! This is really good!

whoa!! anne of green gables style?! kewl!! i just love tat series!! its simply awesome...i hope you'll continue doing so, and i can't imagine who is going to be gilbert blythe?? sounds sasuke to me...

anyways, i hope you update!!

Gee talk about harsh stargazer.

Anyway Temari, you'd be surprised to hear Anne of Green Gables is one of my favorite book series. According to your story, it looks like your basing this off the movie. If you haven't try reading the book too, Anne does a lot of more funny things in the book than she does in the movie. Also, they made up the entire third movie which really bugs me, but actually Anne is a mother when the World war starts (sorry for ranting).

Anyway, it needs some editing, but I actually am very interested! PLEASE continue! BTW, Hinata stutters a little bit too much at times. Try to not over do it that much.

Heya! Rachel here!

Well, miss zero, what are you talking about? I am afraid I don't understand you. Well, or you just thick as a troll. Sorry, to break your happy bubble miss zero, but this story is pretty shabby and needs lots of improvement.]

Okay, you like to go to fast sam. please slow a bit.

and I'll do the rest when I beta.

For all you that think this the best piece of writting, I am sorry to depress you, but it's definitely not. It's nothing compared with valerian spellcasters or some of the better writers on And if you write worse then her, then I suggest you find me as your beta.



Padfoot.

Wow, this is quite an interesting plot. I like how you protray the characters and I like how you write, its nice and neat. :) Do hinata and Hanabi are going to a new place? are there going to be Naruto characters there? This is pretty wicked, I hope you continue and update soon