 K 10/8/10 . chapter 12 why does Harry have such biased hate for Draco when he doesn't know him and hasn't met him and from all you've said about him since randomly introducing him this chapter seems to suggest he is an unwilling participant? |
 Ally 3/8/10 . chapter 16 I liked this story very much, it's a feel-good story, but with a plot and with believable characters. But it was difficult to imagine Sirius go by any other name (I kept reading Sirius when it said Wynn).
I would also have liked it if the Manics and Harry's life in the U.S. had some bigger role to play in his life back in Britain - maybe that something he learned there became a vital part of the defeat of Voldemort, or something. If you had done something like that, it would have shown me that you really had a great plot or something, and that it all matters in the end.
But nevertheless, a very good story. Keep writing!
-Ally |
 rekrula 11/19/09 . chapter 16i enjoyed the story up until chapter 10 when you took a sharp right turn into unbelievable land...better known as WTF? and the story line seemed to go downhill from there. i feel like i was promised lobster and got a crappy bologna sandwich. but the first 10 chapters were simply wonderful! you write very well, i liked the characters and the dialog, so thank you for sharing! |
 shiftyless 9/30/08 . chapter 16I think this is like just neat |
 Aubergine 28 6/25/08 . chapter 16I liked the happy ending. It made me happy. So there. Great story that was wonderfully filled with the characters. Your Severus is beyond cool. Great job!
-Penguin Girl |
 Halfnhalf325 2/26/08 . chapter 16Short and sweet nothing better. |
 MarauderMac 1/28/08 . chapter 7Oh no! Don't make it Harry/Hermione. Anything but that. Anything! I was rooting for Harry/Ginny, but basically any of the female characters would be preferable to Hermione. Those two were born to be friends and nothing else.
Mac. |
 MarauderMac 1/28/08 . chapter 4I am loving this fic. I really like Harry and I find him believable. He's a leader and smart but at the same time fun and, or course, super sexy. Just like canon Harry would be if he didn't have the weight of the world on his shoulders.
Mac. |
 dhrachth 7/22/07 . chapter 16I really much enjoyed this story. It was an original and very interesting take on the characters. (It also kind of goes along with my personal theory that Hogwarts, despite being a grand adventure, really screwed up Harry's life.) |
 GossamerLily 1/9/07 . chapter 16This was a very well written plot and handled wonderfully. I liked the humor and the bits of drama. Harry and Severus' friendship was quite well done. I was surprised but happy to see Wynn was Sirius. From the tone of the story to that point, I thought he was still in prison. I enjoyed reading this story very much. |
 AchillesMonkey 10/29/06 . chapter 1I have added this story to my C2 called Different School. |
 ChildeofBlackFriday 6/7/06 . chapter 3Oh my.
I think I may just love you.
This story is highly believable, and you just threw in some of the best things ever.
Monty Python and RHPS.
*throws bedroom eyes at you* |
 Karaii 3/7/06 . chapter 16Oh god! The end was BRILLIANT! The entire fanfic was AWESOME!
Severus was bloody brilliant here...seriously, your writing of him was amazing. Sarcastic but friend of Harry all the same. Loved it. The ENTIRE thing.
This just made my week x3 And to think I hadn't read it and it's been completed for over three years! Whoa!
Great job! |
 Potterfreak52390 3/2/06 . chapter 16I was good. I liked the light heartedness of it all and not making it full of death and distruction like every other story. Though I must admit that the Happily Ever After was a bit cheesy. |
 SaphirePhoenix 2/16/06 . chapter 1i'm a little confused. what exactly is the group harry's a part of, how long has he been in the u.s., and do his firneds know he's a wizard? then how would he bring them to hogwarts? |