I like this one. It gives it's own surprise to the reader while it's Kakashi who is the one being surprised. ;)

Short but this piece painted a very vivid picture in the mind's eye. :)

This was cute and funny. Keeping it "T" rated with curiosity for the reader what Kakashi would do worked really well. Having been lured into doing the wrong thing, the sweet revenge Sakura sought was ever so funny. Thanks for sharing.

ahaha of course kakashi cheats XD
great chapter!
:)

hehehehehehehehehheheh i could just see it now GREAT JOB !

Hahaha! I was laughing so hard when I read this! I haven't seen "Labyrinth," but I did use Google Image and I just thought it was great how both Kakashi and Pakkun really do look like those characters, Kakashi with his spiky hair and Pakkun with his wrinkled face. I had fun reading this and was impressed with your costume sketches, too. I actually saw the sketches before I read the story and really liked all the detail. Great job with this and your sketches as well! ^_^

Jareth is rather handsome! LOL! Did Sakura still have pink hair? I WANT TO SEE THE MOVIE NOW!

Hahah, I'm on her side.

buahahahahhahahahaha i COULD so see that happening heheheheh great job

haha poor naruto, he never expected anything :D

Ew...

That was cute. Poor Naurto and his couch.
I really enjoyed it.
Rox

Hehe. This is funny and I like how it turns out that they're newlyweds. Good job. =)

LMFAO! Naruto!! Ure so CRAZY!

Oh ha ha, this was very funny! The window, eh... (strokes chin) That sounds interesting... ku ku ku.

Thanks for the entertainment!

Eldr