O.o this is way to confusing! sorry i got to stop reading, its making my head hurt.

very good, yet very confusing, slow down the rush of events a little...

Tee-hee, I like this crossover.

You spelled the name of Ichigo's DNA genes wrong. It's supposed to be 'Iriomote'. Trust me. Okay, you don't have to read this or fix the mistake, but I just felt like telling you.

Cuxie: Wah! It's over! NO!!
Ryou: Do you have a bikini?
Cuxie: O.o?!?!!...Dude. Too random. And perverted.
Ryou: I NEED to know!
Cuxie: Y?
Ryou: Well we're going to the caribbean, right? You said we could go once she updated and she did.
Cuxie: True. And since I'm a girl of my word,(hands M-12 and Ryou passports). Enjoy your trip! You really don't have to answer Ryou's question.
Ryou: Yes she does!
Cuxie: Signing off!
Ryou:(sighs) Fine. Luv ya! Bye!

P.S.: You should do a story called "Pita-Mew"! I've thought about it before but I really don't have a plot. And you're awesome with crossovers. I LOVE THIS STORY SOO MUCH!!1!!1!!

Cuxie: It's about time you updated!
Ryou: Are you talking to M-12? Hey, babe!
Cuxie Get out of the way! What on earth are Kazune and Kotarou arguing about? Wow. This is like a 3-way crossover. Pita-Ten, TMM, and KK! All my favs! Yay! I'm going to the next chappy now.
Ryou: Talk to you soon, babe!

Okay so, I have to say that it's a good idea and all but I think certain parts could have been written better. For one, it gets a little annoying when you explain things that we, as readers, should already know. Like how you explained that Kirika dresses as a man. You have to understand, that the people reading this fanfic have, most likely, already read Kamichama Karin and TMM so it seems pointless to hand them information they should already know unless it fits to the plot or is important to the story's progression.

Also, I thinks some things happened too quickly: Ichigo and Kish fell in love too quickly, The Mews decided to trust Karin's group too quickly, Karin and Kazune gave away information about themselves too quickly and things like that.

On the other hand, I did very much enjoy the last kissing scene between Ichigo and Kish through the glass. I also liked your comparison between Ryou and Kazune. I really never realized how much they were alike!

Please understand that I'm not telling you any of this because I just want to destroy your self-confidence or something. I'm just trying to give you helpful advice.

~rd2luv

this is good! please update when you get the chance! ^_^

As a matter of fact I am happy! I wonder what the others are gonna say about Kazune's little news bulletin. Update again! Please!

Hi!
Woah.This was a long chapter... I like it!
Please Continue!

I.T.A.T.M.M.

P.S: This story is great! ♥

wow! Your stories are REALLY good. another fav anime of mine! Plz continue!

I didn't cheat(promise). I think I know who her half-sister is. I always thought those two looked alike. I would've R&Red sooner but I was...disconnected for a while. Gomen.

this is good. please update when you can^^

Waw... Cool... Kamichama Karin n TMM?? 1st time I say it!!

this is very goo. please update when you can!