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| Lady Chitose 2008-06-08 ch 6,  | abusePonyboy needs a rap- I mean huggling. Poor boy. As your seme I order you to make moar slash. That is all. |
| xemmiex 2008-03-29 ch 6, | abuseI wanna know what happend next!! XD |
| Mentally Insane Fangirl 2008-03-09 ch 6, | abuseOh my goodness, this fic is great! I love the whole love triangle, it is a really good pairing. Dally or Johnny with Ponyboy. Great story, update soon! |
| Mrs.Two-BitMatthews 2008-02-04 ch 6, | abuseWow, that was totally awesome! Read it all in one shot and I absolutley adored it! I'm new to Outsider slash, but I think I'm going to most definatly enjoy it if you keep this sort of stuff up! |
| FREAKSHOW1 2008-01-27 ch 6, | abusePoor Pony. All confused. Johnny and Dally need to commence with the hugging! |
| RatsRule 2008-01-27 ch 6, | abuseaww poor Pony, hes lost without them. I cant wait for more! It was awesomnie goodness |
| dreamer 3097 2008-01-27 ch 6, | abusethis is good |
| Maddiecake 2008-01-26 ch 6, | abuseI was SO happy to see you updated... nobody's updated anything in a while and then I've been waiting for you to update and while the chapter was short I really enjoyed it. Ponyboy's feeling guilty for what happened and it may have been a bit over-the-top with the insomnia but guilt affects people different ways. Nice job, and update soon :D ~Madeleine |
| GoldenMerlin 2008-01-14 ch 5, | abuseAmazing. Usually people make slash about the sex and don't get the relationship realistically. The only problem that I see is it can be confusing when you switch from past tense to present tense. And I think you might be cramming too many irrelevant things into their thoughts-for example, "He felt an urge to jump on his back and try to chock him. But he just doesn't to do it now. He probably will some other day. When his mind isn't giving saddening, heartbreaking images. If, or once, they evolve into anger, he probably will." But in some ways I suppose that helps us understand the story and the characters better, so I don't know where I stand on that. Anyway, this is really cool, and it's great the way you add a lot of drama without making it seem like a cheesy soap opera. |
| gidgetgirl05 2008-01-12 ch 5, | abusePlease update. I want to know what's going to happen. |
| Finland's Faerie 2008-01-05 ch 5, | abusePlease update?! This is REALLY good! |
| FREAKSHOW1 2008-01-04 ch 5, | abuseI love-love this. It's sinfully delicious! |
| RatsRule 2007-10-21 ch 5, | abusehaha your really good. I never thought Dally liked Ponyboy.Keep up the good work |
| Creeno 2007-08-10 ch 5, | abuse=flailflailflail!!= To quote Movies in Fifteen Minutes: This is bad. SososoSO bad...! D: Aw, man, I hope everyone ends up okay in this. |
| Greenstarr 2007-08-01 ch 5, | abuseStories like this are hard to come by, I know that for a fact I cant wait to see what ponyboy will do. I kinda hope He will end up with Dallas (Who dont love Dally XD)Cant wait for more. |