part of me sees this as a chance for a dark shadow you could of had danny arrive to late allowing tori to kill jake. after a few day's they can't find jake they get worried and try o find him matt hears about jake missing and ask if anyone seen shadow. abby says in a happy tone that tori killed shadow when matt hears this he goes blaistic and hits both tori and abby and then thems that shadow is really jake and that tori killed him. jake arrives in the ghost zone no longer a halfa but a full ghost filled with rage and decied that if that if being good got him killed by his best friend and attacked by his sister then he'll be bad and train's and attacks amity park. it would be a cool fic hope you like my idea i got it from gothrose13 fic on deviant art of course the fic would be rated T or maybe M depending on how dark you want the fic either way i think it would make a intersting fic after your done with this one.

great fic not many people can make the children storys work but you did good job.

Most of the time, their plans either epically fail or they work perfectly! I think that's a Fenton trait as well! ^_^

I love how Danny can still act like his 14 year old self sometimes! XD

Undergrowth and Vortex aren't exactly the brightest ghosts...that was entertaining when they started arguing over who was more powerful.

I'm pretty sure I reviewed before but I can remember exactly.. Probably my brain is fried because it's like 12 PM and I picked up vampiric sleeping habits for the summer... Anyways. Stories looking great so far. congratulations on continuing it for 2 years.

Anyways, thought I'd throw this idea out there just cuz I think it'd be interesting. What about a musical wpisode thingy? brought on by the Ghost Writer? PM me if you need any help ever or if you just need someone to talk to.

haha awesome chapter

When Jake told Abby his plan, he said freeze Vortex but instead she told Danny to freeze Undergrowth. Other than this good story. Please update.

nice. I mean the little episode of course. THough, i was a little confused but that's just me not keeping up with you. Glad to see somebody writing!

Okay, why didn't I get the notification for this...?

Aw, Abby and Eric are so cute!

Anyways, Jake stopping Undergrowth that way is way cool. I have the same question as Abby though, how does he come up with his ideas? I'm guessing it comes with the category of not being able to fight ghosts with ghost powers...

Sam and Danny's conversation was cute. :D I like how Danny's still the somewhat immature guy we know and love.

I liked this chapter! And wow, after a vacation that long? God, I would die. Haha! I just got back from vacation too. Great job on this chapter! Update soon, please and thank you! :D

hey!!

another awesome episode!! i hope to read another one soon!! ^-^ :)

I really like how that turned out. But Jake's gonna get in trouble if he keeps using the fire like that. And you've hinted a possible fear of Abby's. A fear of getting upstaged by her 'normal' brother. That might be an interesting episode...

Nice chapter! Loving it, and you shoulod CONTINUE!
Though I think it would be a good idea to point out a part of your story's description: it says HIATUS on it. If I'm correct (tho I may not be) "hiatus" means "on hold for a while" or "not planning on continuing it". But you've been updating fairly regularly for the past...several chapters. So I was wondering, did you take the story off the shelf a while back and forget to take that off of the description, or have you been meaning to turn it off but haven't been able to get the muses to shut up? I'm a little bit confused...

Nah, I'm not surprised. After my trip to Europe, I got no sleep in a 40 hour time span, so I did only a little better than you. But anyway, thanks for the new chapter. And extreme Mini-Golf sounds like fun, but propelling off a castle in Wales takes the cake for me. Sorry ^^

Keep on keepin' on!
~Foxxi

Hehehehehehehehehehehe. Jake is in for some sort of lecture. And I thinking he'd have to reveal himself to Abby's friends. It'd be fun. Too bad Danny's psychology tricks weren't enough to completely defeat the villains. Please update.