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CCX
2008-04-07
ch 1, anon.
abuseI really like this one, especially your portrayal of the Exile. I like her personality a lot; it's how I pictured her to be. Interesting that you brought Atton's past into the first chapter of the story.

Good work. Keep it up. :)
Gabzalabza
2007-11-16
ch 1,
abusei've decided im very confused-- oh, wait, that was someone else. Never mind!

I liked the spin u put on this story. And i always like Atton. I reckon its the best pairing in this whole thingo. I hope u keep writing more like these. It was rather good.

Love ya and leave ya!
Auros Sopherai
2007-07-15
ch 1,
abuseO! Nice story. You're a really great writer and this is captivating stuff. I haven't been reading a lot so this has been a refreshing return for me. You did a good job of capturing the complexity of Atton, and his reactions are just what I would have thought they should be. At the same time, I like the way that brought something to his character, by expounding his early attachment to the exile and his inner conflict, it worked with the game elements but enhanced them as well. I'm bad at coming up with negative criticism so I'll just avoid it today ;). Very good job.

Oh and this:
"Atton felt his insides twist at the sight of her brooding expression, and he knew then, without doubt, that ex-Jedi Nell Roe still had plenty of unwanted questions to ask him."
Brilliantly described! I hate that feeling!!
Kendoka Girl
2007-07-14
ch 1,
abuseI think this story definitely applies for the challenge. I really enjoyed it and you brought out Atton's character well. The interaction was crisp and balanced. My only suggestion would be to give the action sequences some oomph.

Overall, an excellent story. :)
Yonboy86
2007-07-03
ch 1,
abuseNice! i liked the littel bit about Nell Roe stealing anything that wasnt nailed down, very cool! i would say orginal but i havent read any computer game based FanFics before and the littel gamer habits might be explained like all the time.
right now that ive read and enjoyed this im going to go ready the rest of your KOTOR2 fanics. As i enjoyed this one so much!
keep up the good work!
sharinganavenger
2007-06-30
ch 1,
abuseNicely written. Seriously, I really liked the way you interspersed description with dialog. The one thing that struck me as odd was the way you kept referring to Atton as "the pilot" when they hadn't even reached the Ebon Hawk, but that's just a minor detail. Very nice piece.
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