This is SUCH a good story! I know it's been ages since you've updated, but I'm still putting it on Story alerts in hopes that some time you will. I can't wait to see how it turns out. (and if you're stuck, hey, I'll listen to your ideas and be a sounding board! Just PM me!)

please update soon!

*Grins&* This story rocks! ^_^ Are you going to update it anytime soon?

Aww, this was rather beautiful and so cute! :)
Lovely written. :)

please update soon!

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nice story i like how your using clouds niavity to advantage and the reqason the mako isn't as bad is because your having cloud be a cetra in this isn't it? please continue

Please write more soon I'm really enjoying your story and am now addicted so please write some more! lol

Nice story, the idea is really cool. I remeber reading some of this a long time ago, and I think it's nice that you decided to...refresh it. Keep up the good work!

Hmm, haven't read this in quite a while, but then again, it looks as if you've not been working on this till very lately s well. Still, you're doing a fine job here, so please continue, and thanks for writing this, bye for now.

This story was recommended as a story one must read if you like AU with opposite of the original gender. I am very glad that I read this story. I LOVE HOW YOU WROTE AND HOPE TO SEE MORE. Thank you for a wonderful story.

Hm. You've met Yash's challenge ver well. I like it!

Very nice :)
Can't wait to read more (hint)(hint)

good to see you writing this again!

the rewrite does wonders for the storyline and i really cant wait to see more...and what clouds gunna do with the inevitable advent of boobs in the future...should be fun...

really keep it going!

-Dis

Great story! I have been looking every where for female!cloud stories and the only thing I can think of that would make this one better would be to see it updated.