No! You can't stop there! This story is so amazing, I actually have tear tracks down my face. Please write more.
Ruth.

Holy ** if it ends here I will explode. This story is incredible. So many Snape/Harry stories, even the good ones, are just mostly-predictable vehicles for angst. This story has kept me on edge for hours, because not only do I have no idea what will happen next, everything they have done so far has been perfectly in character. Snape is still a real bastard, Harry is painfully soft-hearted but with teeth, and Dumbledore is a little **. I love you.

If it ends here I will EXPLODE. For real.

Hi owlsaway,

good chapter! I like stories where Dumbledore somehow features as 'bad guy'. ... what about an update :-) ?

Best,

no_name

Please, please, PLEASE continue the story!! I'm going crazy waiting for the next chapter and can't seem to get your story out of my head. If you don't think it's horribly pretentious, could you find it in your heart to throw Draco Malfoy somewhere into the mix? Of course, I wouldn't want to interfere with your genious.

Nice. I love this story. Can't wait for more.

I love this story so much! Sometimes it's extremely hard to find a good, captivating, and well-written story and I'm glad I stumbled upon this one! Please keep up the good work!! XD

Right, mate it really is time for a new upload, you agree? Yes? Good.

really good story!

Well, I have finally finished. I do hope you have not abandoned the story as it has been over two months since you updated.

So, DD has been found and you have managed to turn him into a liar as well as the bad guy. You really do not like DD do you?

Still excellent chapter, though I do not usually go in for DD bashing stories.

Please continue :)

You may not have forgotten or banished DD from the story, but I cannot imagine that you have anything nice in store for him either. I am enjoying the story immensely, but I did not realise that DD would end up being the bad guy... the enemy, that Harry would hate him quite so violently.

I know his actions went way over the top, but he was dealing with two extremely stubborn wizards, who have, ultimately, ended up doing what DD set out for them to do, ie, understand the other and look on him as an ally.

Well I think it is pretty obvious that you do not like Ginny Weasley. And she has brown eyes, just for the record.

So Severusnows the prophecy. Interesting. And he has spent so much energy up to now making the future saviour of the wizarding world miserable and even trying to get him expelled.

This whole chapter was so sad and poignant for both Severus and Harry. Tobias was a real charmer. Foul man!

I hope that DD's plan works. This story just gets better and better.

Lesley~

Excellent. Wonder what the wands did. And what is Snape's wand made of? What would react with Phoenix feather? Not anything to do with Basilisk... phoenix tears counter basilisk venom. I imagine it does the same for Acromantula venom.

Onwards...I am sure the answer will be revealed.

Lesley~

I am glad that Harry felt that Lily's actions all those years ago were overly harsh. Even after Severus went righ up to Gryffindor Tower to speak to her, even after he had threatened to sleep there, she threw him over without a backwards glance. As Harry said, he would never have done that. In every other way stories of Lily have apinted her as being a beautiful girl, inside and out. But it would take a very ahrd person indeed to do what she did, I think. I know she had provocation, but still, she sent him packing and seemingly never thought of him again.

As if Harry needs another thing to feel conflicted about. Poor kid.

Is there a reason you changed from the past tense to the present tense?

Lesley~