Oh my God! Oh my God! Brilliant in the way that it echoes half-blood prince, but Oh My God! Dumbledore is evil! Harry breaks out of the binding. Right? Right?

Please update soon!
Rach

Wow, this is a wonderful story. I love the dynamics between Harry and Snape, one minute they're getting along as much as they can, the next they're at each others throats, in a sense. I highly anticipate the next chapter! Especially since Dumbledore's proving exactly why they should hate him.

Wow. I've read the whole thing so far in one sitting. Awesome characterisation of Harry and Snape! And Dumbledore too; manipulative, human, makes mistakes, yet still thinks he knows best.
Update soon, please!

Please, please update soon!

WOW! that old man truly seems a bastard...makes you wonder why there hasn't been any killings of people who judt didn't know when to quit...

Harry's response should be "I do not forgive you". Why does Dumbledore think that he can always use routine politeness to fix his inexcusable behavior?

I like this fic a lot.

This story is the best I have read. Ever. Hands down no contest. I'm absolutely captivated: I read it straight through in five hours. I cannot wait until it is updated!

This is just so poignantly written. You've just broken and humanized the characters so well. Brilliantly done. Can't wait for more.

I... love...this SO MUCH!
You have to update this RIGHT AWAY!
Please?

This was the first FF I have EVER read, I told you that on P&S I think. And... it's the best.

But please continue. Now. Please, waiting for this is actually SORE, like a bloody toothache.

please please please please please please please please please

I am begging you!

*goes down on her knees

please please please please please please please please please

please please please please please please please please please

It was cool,but a strange ending.Maybe you could extend the story?!

Well, I read straight through this entire piece today and if you update soon, that would be wonderful. I love how it isn't even close to becoming a romance, but remains a fascinating, complex, and refreshing take on Harry and Snape's relationship. I also enjoy your use of present tense (I have a soft spot for it myself), and how you have Ron and Hermione offer up their own, entirely different perspectives on the interaction.

Brilliant :)
Please keep the good work up :3

please update soon...excellent so far

Magnificent, marvelous story. Just read everything that's written so far. More please??