Reviews for A Duet of Fists

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Maijril 2008-05-10 ch 6,	abuseI've greatly enjoyed this story so far. It's refreshingly original, and surprisingly humorous. I've found that I especially like stories that have Ranma and Ryouga, not exactly getting along, but working together. Looking forward to seeing this continued
Dax 2008-05-09 ch 6, anon.	abuse:-).
luger 7 2008-05-08 ch 6,	abuseGreat fanfic! Party on, dude.
Risika67 2008-05-07 ch 5,	abuseLike Your Story.
Lathis 2008-05-07 ch 5,	abuseYou have a good story going here. The characters are good, the mythos that you are developing is interesting and your technical skill is good enough that I haven't noticed any errors (not that I'm really looking). I think this is shaping up to be one of the few on going stories that I plan on keeping an eye on in this section. Good job.
Helljump 2008-05-07 ch 5, anon.	abuse...should've seen it coming. Poor Ryouga. =D I personally liked the 'welcome to the club' line. I assume that Koyuki is going to be joining them on their travels? Top job on this chapter, looking forward to the next one.
Doomforyou 2008-05-07 ch 5, anon.	abuseInteresting story you've got here. Of course, being as interesting as it is I must demand moar. I hope the next chapter comes out fairly quickly.
EvilP 2008-05-06 ch 5,	abuseThis was good. Write more and I'll read it.
nekoneko 2008-05-02 ch 4, anon.	abuseplz dont stop @0@ this is one of the best fanfics i ever read no one is OC, and it's like the way rumiko plots in her mangas :D funny yet interesting i wonder what will happen next plz update son :D
Helljump 2008-05-02 ch 4, anon.	abuseLike it... I'd laugh if the daughter somehow got mixed into the usual Nerima mess, maybe an ancestor of Genma made a marriage pact instead of the usual panda? Either way, I think this particular fic is very good so far, and your judgement of Ranma and Ryouga's attitudes to the situation is applaudable. Keep at it.
thegentrygmail.com 2007-11-07 ch 3,	abusei like it!
Ganheim 2007-11-04 ch 3,	abuseChapter 1 He firmly planted his feet and yanked his arm back hard, causing Ranma to punch himself in the face. [I can’t tell you how long I laughed at that.] because he still has the cursed arm in that form. [because he still has an arm in that cursed form?] Chapter 2 He'd been attached to Ranma for nearly an hour and already it was getting tiresome. [According to earlier narrative, it was already an hour before they found Cologne, or approximately so. This would make it more than an hour now, at least.] it takes a minute or two for the chains to unravel and the commands I've been giving you last for the less than a second. [last for _less_ than a second? Or a second less than necessary, or something along those lines? Based on the combined information from the rest of the narrative, I'm leaning towards the latter.] Chapter 3 Rest. Relaxation. Free from the torment of the day. Akane had cooked dinner. [The pacing and structure, in addition to the punchline, was priceless. Superbly done.] This is hilarious, and extremely well done throughout. I’m looking forward to the rest, it’s definitely shaping up to take place in my favourites. There were only a couple of extremely minor trouble-spots to point out, and the rest was so funny that I had to stop to breathe on multiple counts. God bless and happy writing, Ganheim
Aline1 2007-08-28 ch 3,	abuseHmm, the Yuki-onna, the snow godess from japanese folklore, this should be interesting... I am surpised it hasn't been done sooner besides by Krista Perry. This could make ranma's life more interesting even if the Yuki-onna has good intentions towards him and Ryouga. I look forward to where this plots going, it seems pretty well written so far... the format lends it self towards reading which is what ruins some good stories. Good work so far.
Thunderstorm101 2007-08-28 ch 3,	abuseI'm sorry, but it would be JUST THEIR LUCK for Yuki-onna's Braids to have been a gift from an old, now-jilted, ex-boyfriend/-fiancee/-husband. I mean, Ranma has bad luck, and so does Ryoga, so the two of them together should have some of the worst luck in any world. Update? This looks good.
tigerdreams 2007-08-28 ch 3,	abuseGreat stuff. I love the hints that being stuck together like this is making Ryoga a bit more sympathetic toward his rival and his problems. The bathroom scene was also hilarious. Poor, abused Ranma. Poor, hapless Ryoga. ;) I'm looking forward to your next chapter.

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