This is quite an enjoyable fic.

Loved this take on the first OVA. It's a perfect between the lines on what could have been. Yumi and Sachiko are so cute together. The "formal" thanks you for the kiss was just perfect. Thanks for a great story.

You really are very good at this. Thank you for sharing.

Very nice...

You manage to use teh material for the first OAV an made something like this...

I read both your story.

How cute! It's so sweet story.

I really like it. (Thumbs up!)