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| redfoxmoon 2008-08-16 ch 10,  | abuseGreat chapter! Hopefully that picture the Wedy found will get seen by L of Light and they will think to talk to Namikawa. I can't wait to read the next chapter! |
| Pen-Name-Kitsune-chan 2008-08-16 ch 10, | abuseplz update soon! |
| Icetea17 2008-06-03 ch 9, | abuseGreat chapter! I can't wait to read the next one! I love this story! I love how you are combining everything that happened after L's death so it happens while he's alive. And I love the almost split personality Light. |
| Star Jinin 2008-06-02 ch 9, | abuseWHAT!? Does this mean this story is ending right here? Don't worry, the story's perfect. PLEASE update! |
| BrokenDemonChild 2008-03-25 ch 9, | abuseI love it! Though, I am kinda getting the impression that Light and Kira are two seperate beings, like a split personality. Is that what you are trying to do? If it is I love the idea of Kira being a split personality of Light.^^ Also, I am glad we finally get to see Ryuk again! Yay! Are you going to introduce Mello and Near soon? I hope you do! Okay, one last thing, is there going to be a romance between Light and L. Or Matsuda and Misa?Awsome story, can't wait for the update! |
| Mysterious Penname 2008-02-11 ch 9, | abuseInteresting, can't wait for more! Great portrayal of Light! |
| PirateCaptainBo 2008-02-10 ch 9, | abuseBo: aww Update soon please! Ski: agreed please do update soon! |
| Library Drone SAR 2008-02-09 ch 8, | abuseExcelent. I like the adoption thing and that Light was considered for the whammy house. I enjoy all of the L POV's and the way everyones relationships have changed. I also like that somehow light just can't seem to re get ahold of the death note. GO YOU! I can't wait for the next chapter. |
| SonokoTao 2008-01-09 ch 8, | abuseOh my. OwO Mikami went Higurashi on Higuchi and Mido! XD This defiantly changes things. x3 |
| Chou ni Natte 2008-01-06 ch 8, | abuseNo, Mido, Higuchi... Okay, I didn't much like Higuchi, but Mido and Namikawa... :/ I stilled really enjoyed this chapter. Poor Soucihirou, left with investigating Mikami. Well at least he's on the right track. Also, poor Rem. Probably wish she never got involved with humans, lol. |
| Chou ni Natte 2008-01-02 ch 7, | abuseI'm really shocked that you don't have more reviews. This is a really intriguingly piece of work! I would never have thought about this idea, but now its really interesting. I love how you did the dream - the garden door, the sunlight and sadness. I wonder though, L's parents probably died too, right? I wonder if they were killed as well. That would make Light and L have even more in common. Sayu is awesome here. :) Oh, but in this chapter, you wrote that Sayu and L hadn't seen each other before - but L went to dinner with them all a few chapters ago when Light found out he was adopted, so they would've met then. |
| pride1289 2007-12-15 ch 7, | abuseWOW! **!! Oh wait. Never mind. Whose Line Is It Anyway didn't come on. Stupid Grinch stole x-mas! Even though i really like the dog. ANYWAY! Back to reading...then maybe some KHII. |
| pride1289 2007-12-15 ch 6, | abuse*scratches chin*...Wel...i got nothin. *sighs and arms and head drop down* |
| pride1289 2007-12-14 ch 4, | abuseI don't get the last part of this chap... |
| pride1289 2007-12-14 ch 3, | abuseWell i am going to go play KH2 right now. Bye for now! Until next chapter! |