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| LadySorrow1121 2008-03-31 ch 1,  | abuseHe should have shot her. He really should have. -LadySorrow |
| mimarin 2008-03-12 ch 1, | abuseWow. Twisted and bleak and still--yet--just a little hopeful, exactly how I like my MxM. "But Matt was never popular. He was cute and could get anyone he wanted but he always stayed with Mello." Thank you! Fandom doesn't nearly give Matt enough credit for his hotness. Because I am the nitpicker of nitpickers, I wish you could have included a larger line break or a line between the ending and your Author's Note, because *that* was jarring. Other than that, great job! I've always wondered how Mello tracked Matt down, and I really like how you've portrayed the both of them. I've never thought about the idea of Matt being more reckless than Mello, but it makes sense. |
| Micuko 2007-11-08 ch 1, | abuseI love it, it's so cool^^ |
| someone 2007-08-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseawesome your a genuis “Bitch, he's serious, get your ass out! Fucking out! Out now! He'll kill you cuz he's totally crazy like that!” ~ so funny I loved it I've been reading mattxmello all day but this is by far one of the best XD |
| TheMajesticBeanCurd 2007-08-10 ch 1, | abuseAnother beautiful piece from you. A lot of cussing, but somehow it still is sweet.. LOL. You did it. You made me fall in love with your melloxmatt fics. congratz |
| They Call Me Soysauce 2007-07-30 ch 1, | abuseThis was good; I'm glad that you have a continuation of it up!! |
| Nakia the silent one 2007-07-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseOMFG i love this story. You wrote it beautifully. The part where Matt's fucking the chick was hilarious, especially when Mello was about to shoot her. Write more like this, onegai!! |
| ReallyCoolandHotDork 2007-07-03 ch 1, | abuseThat's extremely sweet. Great writing, I love it! =D |
| homicidalgummibear 2007-07-03 ch 1, | abuseI really (x1,0,0,0) liked that. It was very well written and fabulous in all it's awesome glory. In case i didn't make it clear, I loved it. |
| erbby-kiwi1727 2007-07-02 ch 1, | abuseugh! i loved it! definitely a favorite of mine! it was written VERY well...and that was just too cute with Mello and Matt...ugh! great job! |
| JustB181 2007-07-02 ch 1, | abuseOMG, I loved that! They rock, this story rocks, I shall fav. Muahahahaha. -Insanely hyper off chocolate and yaoi.- dfhdghjdfgjfgjdf -Runs away screaming "Mello x Near is creepy!" and throws Matt x Mello pictures as she runs.- Muahahahahaha! Share the love, yosh!? |
| The Unfathomable Sisters 2007-06-30 ch 1, | abuseThat was so mean! I wanted to see what happened next. -pouts- Well, what WAS there was good. A lot of cussing though and some mature themes. It's on that line between T and M but I think it's okay. -grumbles- Ending it there, meanie... Bye now. |
| Skye-Sama 2007-06-30 ch 1, | abusei'm impressed you were able to manage a confession filled with cursing appeal as a sweet one. :) |
| Matt forever a brat 2007-06-30 ch 1, | abuseomg omg so damn good fanfic :3 mxm rules please keep writing mxm! |
| Souvenir 2007-06-30 ch 1, | abuseAw, this was great. I mean it, really great. I think you did a fantastic job of writing Mello, and the whole concept was really believable. It was lovely and very well written. |