Aaaw!

You got your mark. It's totally fluffy. I love it so much!

aaaahhhhhhhh! too adorable! loved this SOOOOOOOO much! :D thanks for posting it!

sweet !

Wow. From Kitty wanting a party to THAT ending... Lol. Nice job! Very cute. :)

Well, I hate Jean and write Scott with Lance(Slash, I love it)but I can honestly say I LOVED this story. It made me like Jean again! Seriously! I liked it. It was very sweet and well written.

Very good job.

But I do like slash, so don't expect Jean/Scott from me. :)

Aw. Cutest story ever!

Very cute! Simple, sweet, romantic, all the right ingredients for the perfect fluff.

That was so cute! I loved it. Simple, but enough. Keep up the good stories!

It was a lovely fic ;D You do work more with the dialogues, though it’s a way to work with it. Maybe you could try more description, but it’s still nice. Dialogues are easier to make funny scenes. ;D

I’ve noticed that you’re a JOTT fan, right? It would be nice if you checked the fic ‘Why JOTT should be JOTT’ on my profile, it’s not just my fic, it can be yours too. Curious? I hope so, because I really want to see your comment about it. And you can even flame it ;D Though I’m sure you’ll like. The fic is not done yet, I’m working with Jean’s and Scott’s POV, but I still need to find a beta.

Anyway, great one-shot.

See ya

Maia

Aw, that was really fluuffy lol I loved it, great story

cute

aw

thats so sweet!

That was sweet! Not too overdone with the fluff, but definitely a generous amount. :)

it is ok la

This was really cute!