 D.J. Scales 2009-10-29 . chapter 6Aw Man its over already. I really liked it. |
 Dark Flames Of Destiny 2009-04-22 . chapter 6OMG, you finished it! XD Wow, there's a surprise. Good ending, too. I stick around. ^^ |
 ming7865 2008-11-06 . chapter 1I liked it, but I don't read stories with CHEE! HOO! WAA! Even if Yang's not saying it! I feel embarrassed by just typing that!! |
 D.J. Scales 2008-10-25 . chapter 5Now that was comedy. Torture for Herman equals fun for Carl. |
 D.J. Scales 2008-10-25 . chapter 1Are we talking about Jade from Jackie Chan Adventures when you mentoned Jade? |
 EmpathicArtist 2008-08-27 . chapter 5I had a lot of fun reading this =)
Jade is one strong wolf for being able to keep it up while her leg was sprained...
I also like how you incorporated a bit of Jade's personal history in there, during the part where Herman explained why he wanted to kill her.
It looks like YangxJade is finally blossoming - well, sort of. Cute couple. ^_^ |
 EmpathicArtist 2008-08-27 . chapter 4._. That's... That's a strong ant.
Poor Jade. Right in the middle of training. =/
She seems to be gradually getting the hang of things... But then got herself in a big spot of trouble |
 EmpathicArtist 2008-08-27 . chapter 3Pretty nice. Jade serves as a good balance between the siblings, being able to relate to both of their personalities and have some form of experience in both of their fighting styles of expertise. I find her a pretty nice character, and she fits in well with the so far subtle environment; though I'd also be excited to see her dishing out pain to some baddies, whenever you feel like introducing the moment. =P
as always, good writing, please continue. |
 EmpathicArtist 2008-08-27 . chapter 2You nicely conveyed Jade's curiosity and innocence yet again in a captivating and interesting manner. It's quite fascinating that she's finding proficiency in Woo Foo so quickly, but there's nothing wrong with that. You also show the slowly festering like-hate ties between Jade and Yang; one minute they bicker, the next they get along like best pals. It's a fun and lively cycle. Keep it up. |
 EmpathicArtist 2008-08-27 . chapter 1This was a very good first chapter. Got me interested in the show; I looked up what information I could to basically understand it. You portray your OC Jade as a sharp, intelligent young girl, mysterious and interesting, to where I want to figure out more about her and see how she acts in different situations. Props for really good writing talent. ^_^ |
 Tsu-FLT 2008-07-28 . chapter 5Woo, I realy enjoyed this new chapter :D, Carl surely was happy at the ending XD.
Can't wait to see the ending of that, I'm deing for the rest o3o
~Tsu |
 mdizzle 2008-07-24 . chapter 5Wasn't Master Yo supposed to be the last Woo Foo Master on Earth. I'm pretty sure they mentioned that at some point. |
 Dark Flames Of Destiny 2008-07-19 . chapter 5*LMAO* I laughed so hard throughout this. It was hillarious! |
 Dragon of Light and Shadow 2008-07-18 . chapter 5i'll be waiting for the final chapter. |
 Z -Raviel 2008-07-14 . chapter 5Hey, wow. This new chappie was totally improvised indeed. It was fun to read and it had a good pace on the action. ^^
Woah, behold Jade's tail-standing woo foo powers! :D That totally caught my attention, guess its some sort of signature power of hers, I believe. xD
Alright, gonna be waiting for the last chapter of this fic, Cece. *glomps* Twas fun to read! n-n |