Short, sweet, and beautifully written. Fantastic! I couldn't find /anything/ to complain about. :D

Everything about it was great. I loved the way you captured the characters' personalities so /perfectly/, and the description--everything--made it jump off the page with so much realism. I didn't read the story, I watched it happen.

Again, this was fantastic. You totally made my day.

-Nimfalath

Plot hole!? What plot hole? :p

The description of Sylar moving fluidly, like clockwork, is brilliant.

I love me some Syden! I want more. So bittersweet and sad.

Oh wow, that was written so beautifully - Eden/Sylar hm, that is one pairing, I never would have thought of - but I like it. I love both characters and they were both written really well... Kudos! that was wonderful.

Oh, interesting. It reminds us of how Eden and Gabriel are slightly alike. I also love stories that kind of delve into his past. Lovely job!

This was very beautiful, very touching. I really like the pairing. I like the idea also, I would really love to see that kind of story incorporated into the show. I only wish this was longer ^^

I liked it. Just wanted to leave you a review here. I know I read it somewhere else too. Hope we see more fics like this.

-Ellie