This is really good! It's short but paints a lovely picture, and they're both exactly in character xD

your writing is excellent; it reminds me of francesca lia block but more grounded. borderline of ms. black's style, but with more perspecive. really, really good.

pretty good. but i'm getting depressed now, so i'm gonna read sumptin else

equally just as trippy. almost. i need to read this book.

Oh, for me? ♥ I knew there was a reason we were friends. lolz.

But I love you anyway.

Y'know, we don't actually have 'subways' as such here? Well, we've got the food chain, but we just call them trains here. Not subways. TRAINS AND UNDERGROUND TRAIN STATIONS.

I love how Val's mother shops. It seems so fun and ridiculous and frivolous. And Treasure Trolls? My heart beats wildly with passion for thee. :3

And Ms Beckett. It feels like our conversation all over again, except that there was no Ms Beckett, only a reference to a certain band. Or was that with Caitlan? Either way, you're channeling a great deal of us/crack.

xDD A dodgy, smutty 'romance novel' for mummy. I love this. And Val's little comment about the floor - only a puny five year od will ever bother to comment on that.

Seeing graffiti outside a train window is one of my favourite experiences in the city. My friend and I rate it.

And I love how this makes the people, not the place, the real focus of a city. Well, sort of. I can't explain is. *loses miserably*

I've got to write you something else. xD Something with graffiti, I think. I had an idea when I read your review, but it sort of slipped away (in the Never-induced haze... *fails yet again*)

Favourite line? 'Her friend's a blur of blue and porcelain, statue-still on the midnight train.'

MUCH LOVE FOR YOU O' MIGHTY SOCK!ONE.

You rock this world. Truly, you do. And we are -this- close to dominating the Holly Black fandom. Now, my only suggestion to you is that once we have ruled this one, we move on to the Black Magician trilogy. Go read those books, by whatsername Casavanh or something. Really, they're love. And don't quote me on the last name there.

WE WILL RULE.

OH OH OH
I LOVE LOVE LOVEE THE IDEA
'HEART OF THE CITY' ROFL
THAT'S SO RADDUH

oh my
ive yet to write one, neh?
a holly black story
homg
must think of plot D;

maybe something cutey wiff chibi-kaye, YEAH? ;D

lolk♥

A lovely little Valiant drabble. I always like what you write...Not much else to say, really. Which is a compliment. I think I might add you to my author's list, though. XD