Wow i actually loved that. That was totally original and i haven't read anything like it. Keep writing

Love Lady Topaz

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This is a very intriguing story. Very original.

Wow!

I love your story so far. Mischief always proves for an interesting plot. I never figured out why they had to kill Duke Roger in the first place.

Whoa. That was ...busy... But I absolutely loved it. A sequel would be very interesting. You're quite talented.

haha, oh my gosh!

how cool but very strange!

i like it please do a sequel!

i've just read chapter 6, and i love it! whooho! jon realises he loves alanna. how lovely. i miss the jon in in the hand of the goddess, he was so cool back then

Kept this chapter in case Radella insulted me again. It's v. gd b/w. Radella, I am *not* a barbie! Ozorne *is* so cute, isn't he? Did u insult Kitten? SHE'S THE ONLY CHARACTER THAT I CAN DEAL WITH! Oh, and I'd just like 2 apologise 2 Junipertree, all the other authors who's review space we've used 4 our argument. Hey, @ least we read the stories! This one was the best I'd read 4 ages. It was *so* good, a sequel would b nice. Ooh, if u don't put 1 up, I'll organize an ongoing argument b-tween me Radella 4 *all* ur stories. I think that's a pretty gd threat. What do u think, Radella?

Wow. I mean WOW. Powerful fic. I loved your eulogy for Jon at the end of the sixth chapter. I cant think of anything else to say. I'm a bit shell shocked from reading it. Bravo!

Poor poor Thayet! Thats so sad(and probably true). I know Kally's ummm.. indisposed? but bringing Rodger back is probably not the best idea. Greats Fic. I love it! Maybe you should look into some anger management courses though...j/k

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Okay, Rose Maiden (gosh your pen-name is long, you have to get a nickname! Rosie or sumthing) here we go again. YOU DIDN'T want ALANNA to DIE? Have you completely lost it for the better this time? Come to your senses? Wow, Junipertree should definatley write more like this! And you wanna know the reason why Alanna gets excused every time she storms off? She's too good with a sword, and nobody would want to face her when she gets mad (especially the person who started the argument in the first place *coughJoncough*) because she'll probably end up not talking to them for eight years...Ozorne? Okay, if you must have it that way, very very very misunderstood. Mentally detracted from. Needs to see a phycologist like, pronto. And Kitten is friends with Daine so I don't like Kitten. Daine is everything you'd like Alanna to be (but she isn't!) and no, I don't want more insults for Alanna, and I do believe you've made up plenty. *grinz* ta-ta for now! Rads

No flames here. This is one of the first DDA stories I have read and its really good. Everybody (almost) is in character and the emotions are real, not fake like in some stories. You are lucky you are so good at these: usually I get reviews that state how light-hearted it is and such. Good job! This was a great fic! You should write more!

I didn't want Alanna 2 die! Funny, that. Can't flame brilliance! Radella, u need pessimists 2 bring the optimists down! What's wrong w/likin Kitten? I like Ozorne 2. Must have been that whole mass-murder thing. Hey, he's just v. misunderstood. And Alanna's 2 understood! She, no, IT, gets excused each time she storms off. "She has a temper, it's ok." So does ev'ry1, but it doesn't wrk in the classrm!

Alanna *wasn't* bein silly. That was cute - I've almost started likin her again. Poor Kally - all alone. What happens when Liam's old enough 4 the throne? Sequel! S*E*Q*U*E*L*!*!*!*!*!*!*!*!

That sucks if you were Alanna...

But it was good