 debkay 2009-03-03 . chapter 22I have read this story twice, I just love it.
Are you ever going to finish it? It is so good - it is a real shame not to give it an ending. |
 Timeflies 2008-07-04 . chapter 22I somehow didn;t get this reviewed. I was checking old stories and tryig to catch up on things. Lyrics were fine. They had their place in this chapter. More please |
 Timeflies 2007-11-21 . chapter 21Truth is now out, out for both of them. Facing one another is the only way to resolve it. Reading on. |
 Timeflies 2007-11-21 . chapter 20Nadir is caught with only half the story and he doesn't understand it all. He will soon enough, if he will talk to someone. Reading on. |
 Timeflies 2007-11-21 . chapter 18Aminta is so lost and wants to escape, but taking her back would never do. Erik would not let it happen, and she would run again if given the chance. Reading on. |
 Timeflies 2007-11-21 . chapter 15Guess I never hit the alert button so I lost the story, I am back, sorry. Sing that song will dredge up memories for both. Reading on. |
 Adi Sagestar 2007-10-03 . chapter 22Yay! They've finally stopped torturing each other! Now there can be fluff! Update soon, or the Weasels will get you, the Spork Weasels, the WSA! Beware the Weasel Spork Army!
- Adi |
 Timeflies 2007-09-06 . chapter 13Well that worked, a bad drink or sing, I would choose to sing too.
Reading on. |
 Timeflies 2007-09-06 . chapter 12They just don't know how to be with one another, except to cause hurt. Reading on. |
 Ranayana 2007-08-12 . chapter 22OMG! God I loved the two last chapters. Can't wait for more! *happy dance* |
 LovetheScottishAngel 2007-08-08 . chapter 22YES! *tosses confetti* *tackles you in an uncivilized manner* *gives you a bear hug*
You're my hero(ine). I love you.
Chs. 21 and 22 were PERFECT!
Keep going!
- LtSA (LovetheScottishAngel) |
 Saloma-Kiwi 2007-08-06 . chapter 22You have done excellently so far, filling in any exsisting plot holes, and adding your own flair to the story! Thank you so much for continuing it for Gerik's Angel, who did a great job to start with. You are taking it to a new level! Very well done so far.
There is only one grammar error that I noticed in chapter twenty or twenty-one: "He had already showed her the affects of it this afternoon." It should be "effects" instead of "affects." (This is one of my pet peeves, not too big of an mistake, but still, an error.)
Again, thank you, and please update as soon as you can! |
 Angel 2007-08-05 . chapter 22 This story has my interest. Keep up the good work! |
 eyeplayclarinet 2007-08-05 . chapter 22i dont like this story now, at least not near as much as i did before, o why did you pare them up, *sniff* |
 phancatec 2007-08-05 . chapter 22yes yes yes -- they are each others angels again -- and whew -- so glad that was not Nadir or Raoul standing there - i was sweating that cliff hanger-- good chapter and look forward to more!! |