The storyline's pretty good, though I'm finding it rather difficult to tell where it is heading. The characters aren't quite holding true to their real personalities, but it's still interesting to see them with the given personalities. To be honest, I'm rather impressed by the good use of the English language, though there are a few spelling and grammar mistakes, but not nearly as many as the majority of other fanfictions I have read on this website.
Good job. Keep going with it. ^_^

Oh wow, it's been a while o_o
Still loving it! Honestly, this is one of my favorite fics ^^ And such an awesome idea for a crossover... definitely one of the best vamp fics out there. Ickle Roxas just makes it so much better xD
Dun worry about the yaoi, we can wait. We're very patient :3
Luffs!

...namine is ucky. Axel should be pounding Roxas. But thanks for finally updating^^ i love this story and vote for short but quick chapters. A little more yaoi would be nice though ^.-

A few typos here and there, but a great chapter nonetheless ^^ I'm glad you updated :P

LUFFS!

Ah, you always leave me wanting more... please, update :D You're one of the few authors that I drop everything for when I see an update in my inbox directing me to your latest chapter. I've been a longtime fan of how dark you write KH characters, and yet how you manage to keep them true to their counterparts. Even Sora, who you've written as... well, to put it bluntly, pretty much this emo vampire... and yet you retain his naivety and sense of justice (as is apparent throughout Underworld... no spoilers from me, though). I love the crossover as well... you've intrigued me enough to watch the movie lol. Haven't yet, admittedly, but only because I don't have much time to sit down and watch a movie I haven't seen before yet, but once I have the time and can find it I promise you I will. I wikipedia'ed it, at least ;) Anyway, lack of reviews are unfortunate, and I hope that changes soon enough. You always have my seal of approval, though :)

P.S. Thanks to you I still have my eye out for a pair of bondage black pants with neon green trim... that will be a smexy pair to add to my collection. Almost bought a black pair with white trim recently, but damn my friends for reminding me to be thrifty... Had to pass it up :( *is waiting for them to go on sale instead* Much love... stay in touch; I miss ya :D Much to catch up on if you're interested ;)

this is like the twisted yaoi version of 'underworld', I LOVE IT! you know...i think you should have roxie and axel meet in the next chapter^^...if you know what i mean...*kinky eyebrow waggling* hehe lol 'nough said, UPDATE! plz >.

:O Well /**/.
And I've finally seen Underworld! And Underworld: Evolution ^^ Loved it too.
Great chapter, I can't wait for the next one X3

Loved it in just about every sense of the word love that you can possibly use to describe this. Making love to text wouldn't exactly work, so we'll omit that >.O

Take care :D More please!

...If you don't continue this, I'll have to go after you with Namine's weedwhacker. Which by the way happens to be an axe. Apparently it works very well on the weeds.

Also, from the last chapter... yeah. I TOTALLY meant Tidus. >>;;

Well... won't Hayner be surprised? XD

Mwahahahaha, I just now realized that I'm probably spamming your mailbox! >D ...Unless you don't have FFnet set to email you when someone reviews, which would just ruin all of my fun, now wouldn't it?

...I kinda also just noticed that I haven't been talking about how great this fic is. Which it is. I'm entirely addicted to it and I haven't even seen Underworld yet. ...It's coming, I know it is! In the mail. Because God loves Netflix.

oh GOODY! I knew it was Roxas. ALL ALONG. (For serious. I totally called it X3)

ohyes. Very short. BUT. I have the magical power of the 'next chapter' button ^^

Yeah, that line definitely suits Axel better than Sora >>;;

...I could say wonderful happy luvieful things about this, just... not right now.
So instead I'll give you hearts.