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| Phoenixfire979 2008-07-23 ch 6,  | abuseThis is the second time im reading this story and its still great! |
| bladefax 2008-07-16 ch 11, | abusegreat storyline...well written. More please! |
| Phoenixfire979 2008-06-19 ch 5, | abuseAww, more sweetness! (I want that sword!) |
| Phoenixfire979 2008-06-19 ch 3, | abuseAww, poor jayne again. and river was a bit harsh. But im sure it'll all turn out in the end. |
| Phoenixfire979 2008-06-19 ch 2, | abusePoor Jayne lol |
| Phoenixfire979 2008-06-19 ch 1, | abuseFunny start! Struck down immediately, hilarious lol |
| Flowerfairy30 2008-06-14 ch 10, | abuseWow, that was wonderful. I just found this story as I was looking back at the stories that were posted before I started reading here. I was a fun and funny read. |
| williamjamesw 2008-05-20 ch 10, | abuseAww, poor Badger; and he didn't even do anything wrong (that we know about). Of course, the other two deserve everything they got, and more. |
| Phoenixfire979 2008-05-20 ch 10, | abuseAnother Rayne story done VERY well! LOVE IT! Theres not enough Rayne in the world... |
| Getragen von der Flamme 2008-05-16 ch 3, | abuseVery good, the story and most of the characters are solid. Except River, she's a bit all there. Perhaps if she was slightly crazier it would make things run that much smoother. But overall very good. |
| Sunshineali 2008-05-14 ch 10, | abuseThis rocks! My favorite part was: “Yeah, well, you would too, was the only way to make sure Marco and his lot didn’t try and get frisky.” Jayne groused. For some reason, that made me get giggly. Can't wait for more of this. I was however, surprised that Jayne would let Wing and Atherton live after them taking River from him. I figured he go a bit mental on them. :)Ali |
| jane0904 2008-05-14 ch 10, | abuseJust read the whole tale, so far, and I love it. Jayne with a hand towel wrapped around him, cleaned up, going dancing, then fighting ... who wouldn't fall for him? |
| Hidden Relevance 2008-03-27 ch 9, | abuseOh yay.. just yay Gah this is hysterical.. but considering the actor.. really rather accurate I think lol Definitely adding this to my watch! |
| Morwen Tindomerel 2008-01-24 ch 8, | abuseOh yeah, I've seen Adam Baldwin in other roles. Jayne cleans up REAL well! :D Good thing the other ladies on Serenity are all committed to other men or River might have to do some fighting. |
| ganainm 2007-10-24 ch 9, | abuseThis is cute. I've enjoyed it. |