 Rosalie-Emmett-Kristin-Jett 2009-09-20 . chapter 11aw theyre married!
omg i was laughing my ** of from the pregnancy!! ahaha |
 Rosalie-Emmett-Kristin-Jett 2009-09-20 . chapter 10haha aw thats so cute! i ah-DORE this story! haha |
 lilcheekyelaine 2009-09-01 . chapter 4love it |
 veryannoyed 2009-08-06 . chapter 11aw their so cute! |
 Waiting On Yesterday 2009-08-03 . chapter 11lol good job =) |
 yay 2009-07-19 . chapter 3 review good story now GIVE ME A HUG EDDIE |
 styling16 2009-05-29 . chapter 11THIS IS JUST TOO CUTE! |
 bella 2009-03-04 . chapter 11 i loved the story so much i want to see Bella's black dress,thow.I cant wait to read forks middle school! |
 augustine4 2009-01-10 . chapter 11I love this story. |
 nunanx3 2008-11-18 . chapter 9Don’t make me snap my fingers in a Z fo’mation, exclamation, booty rotation! Talk to the hand, flick of the wrist. OHMYGOSH! You just got dissed! lol i totally know this! and i used it once. lets say i got a lot of stares... |
 xAngel-Of-Nightx 2008-11-12 . chapter 11MAN that was funny, and im sorry but i have to say that if they actually believed some of the things that were said like the kiss, then they were really clueless kids, no offense or anything, I mean it was still so funny, and cute! :p |
 notdoingthisanymore 2008-10-31 . chapter 1they are so adorable! Edward asks him self some weird questions. but seriously who IS pete? |
 Akatsuki Child 2008-10-26 . chapter 11AW!ohmygosh ohmygosh ohmygosh! that was so cute! I loved in chapter eight when it was like 'i got there in the nic of time' and then like 'who was Nick? is he related to Pete?' awesome!! keep writing!! |
 BrightxSpringxMorning 2008-10-26 . chapter 11I have to say, I saw this a couple times on here and I wasn't sure I wanted to read it. I did, and it was one of the best fanfictions/stories I've seen! You're spelling was really good and you could definatly tell that they were kids. Emmet was really funny though not overbaring with the pranks and everything. Alice was definatly my favorite character when she was fighting with Emmett. Shirt to clean the toilet bowl? How did you come up with that!? And I thought putting halepinoes (i don't know how to spell that) in my brothers chili was bad! That was really well written! If I had to say anything bad about it, it would be that it was short compared to some fanfictions. I really can't think of anything you did wrong! Maybe put a pov in Emmett's...just for a prank or something. I think for some things (Missy) Emmett's point of view would be hilarious. So, in summation (is that really a word?) it was amazing. |
 random reader99 2008-10-17 . chapter 6emmets got a fan club |