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Rosalie-Emmett-Kristin-Jett
2009-09-20 . chapter 11
aw theyre married!

omg i was laughing my ** of from the pregnancy!! ahaha
Rosalie-Emmett-Kristin-Jett
2009-09-20 . chapter 10
haha aw thats so cute! i ah-DORE this story! haha
lilcheekyelaine
2009-09-01 . chapter 4
love it
veryannoyed
2009-08-06 . chapter 11
aw their so cute!
Waiting On Yesterday
2009-08-03 . chapter 11
lol good job =)
yay
2009-07-19 . chapter 3
review good story now GIVE ME A HUG EDDIE
styling16
2009-05-29 . chapter 11
THIS IS JUST TOO CUTE!
bella
2009-03-04 . chapter 11
i loved the story so much i want to see Bella's black dress,thow.I cant wait to read forks middle school!
augustine4
2009-01-10 . chapter 11
I love this story.
nunanx3
2008-11-18 . chapter 9
Don’t make me snap my fingers in a Z fo’mation, exclamation, booty rotation! Talk to the hand, flick of the wrist. OHMYGOSH! You just got dissed! lol i totally know this! and i used it once. lets say i got a lot of stares...
xAngel-Of-Nightx
2008-11-12 . chapter 11
MAN that was funny, and im sorry but i have to say that if they actually believed some of the things that were said like the kiss, then they were really clueless kids, no offense or anything, I mean it was still so funny, and cute! :p
notdoingthisanymore
2008-10-31 . chapter 1
they are so adorable! Edward asks him self some weird questions. but seriously who IS pete?
Akatsuki Child
2008-10-26 . chapter 11
AW!ohmygosh ohmygosh ohmygosh! that was so cute! I loved in chapter eight when it was like 'i got there in the nic of time' and then like 'who was Nick? is he related to Pete?' awesome!! keep writing!!
BrightxSpringxMorning
2008-10-26 . chapter 11
I have to say, I saw this a couple times on here and I wasn't sure I wanted to read it. I did, and it was one of the best fanfictions/stories I've seen! You're spelling was really good and you could definatly tell that they were kids. Emmet was really funny though not overbaring with the pranks and everything. Alice was definatly my favorite character when she was fighting with Emmett. Shirt to clean the toilet bowl? How did you come up with that!? And I thought putting halepinoes (i don't know how to spell that) in my brothers chili was bad! That was really well written! If I had to say anything bad about it, it would be that it was short compared to some fanfictions. I really can't think of anything you did wrong! Maybe put a pov in Emmett's...just for a prank or something. I think for some things (Missy) Emmett's point of view would be hilarious. So, in summation (is that really a word?) it was amazing.
random reader99
2008-10-17 . chapter 6
emmets got a fan club
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