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Nueva Paz
2009-11-28 . chapter 22
*claps and cheers* Yay! Bravo! Well done!

Okay, so I got to this a bit later. But at least I did finally get around to reading the last chapter.

The ending is perfect! :D <3
Muzzlehatch
2009-11-16 . chapter 1
I didn't know anything about Maslow's HoN until I read an article on it yesterday and remembered that you are writing a fanfic using the concept. So far, so good.
Evilevergreen
2009-11-12 . chapter 12
I love the fact that they even yell at each other when they are sleeping.

That is just too funny.

And I want a Drakken Foot massage! =(
Evilevergreen
2009-11-12 . chapter 11
Aww, she remembered his birthday. =D

How cute!
Evilevergreen
2009-11-12 . chapter 10
I love how Shego went around the lair, looking for an assistant that didn't exist.

I can't help, but wonder what the Henchmen were thinking as it was all going down.

I mean here is this woman, who, if you are smart, you are more afraid of then your super genius boss. Your boss, who on his best day, probably couldn't even scare a dandelion. And to see him say one sentence, ONE, and have this nearly fearless woman, break down into tears, by the mere thought of not being able to work for him anymore.

You know they are wondering, 'What kind of hold does he have on her?'

Because I'm sure that even they have noticed, even when things go to **, that their boss and his right hand woman, always find their way back to each other.

Man, this is such good story.
Evilevergreen
2009-11-12 . chapter 9
Aww, I can't believe Shego was crying and that Drakken actually fired her.

I love how you write the moments that could have happened between the episodes of the show.

You're doing it in a very creative way. =D
Evilevergreen
2009-11-12 . chapter 7
I laughed so hard when I read this:

“To the lab, Shego!” Drakken announced dramatically.

They spent the rest of the evening cleaning chocolate off of the laboratory walls.

I couldn't help but wonder what blew up. =D
Hugh Fisher
2009-11-07 . chapter 22
I found this via TVTropes recommendation.

A long read, but overall worthwhile.

The characterization and dialogue worked well for me, and it wasn't long before I started "hearing" the voice actors even though this is actually dealing with more mature concepts than the cartoons.

I think the last two chapters are the weakest, since they include so many other characters from the cartoon itself. For most of the story, it's a character study between Drakken and Shego during "down time" between plots that works really well. But to me the last two chapters have a more cartoon-like feel to them because of all the extra characters. It's hard to accept Drakken and Shego reconsidering their feelings for each other with Motor Ed in the scene.

Minor quibble: while it's not necessary to the story to know that a given chapter occurs just after episode X, it would have helped if the notes about the time scale were before each chapter rather than after. Some of us haven't yet memorized every episode of KP :-) and can't immediately identify when exactly Drakken was dropped from a great height into a canyon.

Oh, and "Acceptance of Facts" was a really MEAN thing to do to readers who'd got that far! :-)

Thanks for putting in so much work.
Lon Wolfgood
2009-11-01 . chapter 1
The other day at college I was daydreaming, when I heard the professor say "this triangle shows Maslow's priority of needs..." and I thought... "Wait, didn't I already know this?"

*bows to professor Ninnik*
Convictski
2009-09-24 . chapter 22
I can't believe it's over. I've followed it for such a long time and loved every line of it, and now it's done? Kind of hard to comprehend...
Reader101w
2009-09-22 . chapter 22
Very interesting story,

Well written and good in character.
Good job on keeping it completely Drakken and Shego, I have not read a story of this size with that feature.

keep up the good writing,
reader101w
PoisonousAngel
2009-09-09 . chapter 22
I'm happy and sad at the same time, if thats possible. I was looking for to the big ending but dreading it as well. But I suppose I'm more happy than sad. :)

Great chap! I loved the kiss part, and the whole thing with the surpressed feelings. Very funny. I hope you continue to write now that the big one's over. You're really awesome at it. Congrats on finishing! :D
Dr. Agent
2009-09-08 . chapter 22
What a ride!

Truly, this is the best D/S story around. The style is unique, and effective, obviously.

Thanks for putting such a great effort into this, it really shows.

Cheers.
Charlotte C.
2009-09-08 . chapter 22
'Maslow' over? I'm sad and happy. Sad, because there's not any more, but happy because it's complete now, and I can enjoy the whole awesome, amazing story.

I really enjoyed being your beta; you are such a fabulous writer, and fun to chat with, too. :)

I liked the changes in this last chapter; glad my comments were helpful. And it was a perfect ending; as I've told you before, I love to see Drakken and Shego having fun together.

And finally...for anyone checking out the reviews and deciding whether to read or not...Read. This. Story! It is, in my opinion, THE definitive D/S story. So true to the show, in character, funny, sexy, sometimes serious and often delightfully awkweird for my favorite villains.
blue-crystal-9
2009-09-08 . chapter 22
E! This made me night. And effectively helped me procrastinate from Philosophy and Music theory homework. :P

This entire fic was just great. Definitely the best Drakken/Shego fic I've ever read. The characters are written perfectly. And you write with such wit... that's one of the things that I always look for when watching/reading something, and what attracted me to Kim Possible in the first place. And the wit in this fic is golden, and so definitely Shego. There were parts that made me actually laugh out loud. I just loved this fic, and thank you so much for writing it. :D
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