I liked it..alot...it was intriguing to read...i wanted to see more though..good job with Itahina! n.n

Well writen, could have been a tiny bit longer I guess.
I really enjoyed reading it! ^^

this is a really good story. Are you going to make chapters? It would be an awsome strory. I love any Hinata couple exept NaruHina, so this is so awesome! ^_*

^_^ good keep going.

more hinata maddness soon to be itahina i heart itachi hinata

It was kinda a combo of friendship and romance. It was really good.

Loved it. (:

Nice, start, you should definately continue.

this was good! Can you make more chapters??

yeh! keep it up! please put deihina!

I don't know why I am so attracted to this pairing, but I am and your story is a great example of how they would meet.

intersting

whe! bYou should make it friendship that blooms into romance! very good so far, please update soon!

Awesome first chapter! I thought the atmosphereical sense to the story was just perfect. I don't even know if that's a word sorry if it isn't. lol. I look forward to reading another chapter from you soon. Well, until next time then. ^_^

...wow, pretty good for a one shot.

you know how you can make it even better? a SEQUEL, BABY !

lol, sorry for my -outburst-

but a sequel would be nice. this story could be done and over with, but it has a mysterious 'to be continued' vibe coming off of it.

sequel? please?