 Jedi Carpet 2009-04-18 . chapter 9Well, I am certainly impressed. For one, using Jacen as a doctor is an excellent place for him, and Jaina as a smuggler is also a good fit. All your characters have seemed to have found a very natural place for themselves with the lack of a Jedi order for them to exist in (Save Lowie...that's an odd one.) Overall it is well written, if lacking in detail, and you create a good plot. I'm quite looking forward to reading the next two seasons! |