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Reviews for: Fallen Season 1
Jedi Carpet
2009-04-18 . chapter 9
Well, I am certainly impressed. For one, using Jacen as a doctor is an excellent place for him, and Jaina as a smuggler is also a good fit. All your characters have seemed to have found a very natural place for themselves with the lack of a Jedi order for them to exist in (Save Lowie...that's an odd one.) Overall it is well written, if lacking in detail, and you create a good plot. I'm quite looking forward to reading the next two seasons!
Ricoch3t
2007-07-11 . chapter 1
Well, hello there! =D Nice story line. Though I'd like a more descriptive view of the space battles.

And maybe shorter chapters?

So, when's the rest coming up?
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