Lovely writing. The last scene was so stark, yet so clear. I loved the journey you took them on in the prequel and Sons and Lovers. I can't wait to read more of your works!

omg you have to make a sequel to this

This was heart-wrenching and very well written. In a way, this story was too good, too deep, for a happy ending. But I would still like to be witness to that next day... and the day after. Thank you for sharing this.

beautiful story...so sad and yet very realistic.

Love this story! House's past is very interesting and I wish the show would explore it more as well! Glad you are!

It's such a bueatiful story.

You captured so well the mood, the vibe of the situation. You made it moving and lyrical, without being pretentious or teary. Though i'd love to read a continuation, I like the way you ended it. It Leaves readers with hunger, but also provokes thinking.

The way you portrayed House is pretty impressive. He's very ambiguous, torn inside, full of doubts, yet caring and loving.

And you style is splendid.

woah! that was intense!!I am soo disappointed

I'm so sad that she miscarried, but this was a terribly wonderful story. I quite enjoyed it.

OMG! Thats the END? That was SO sad, its terrible! You can't seriously leave this story there, its way too good for that! You're an amazing writer though, and I really hope that you'll add something--anything! lol... GREAT job!

Oh, what a sad ending. That last line. Are you sure you won't do an epilogue, maybe?

I hope you write more fics. Maybe whatever happens in the new season will give you some inspirations! I'll have to check out your LJ.

This was a great story, I enjoyed it very much! Thank you, and I hope you enjoy season 4!

Oh, I wish it hadn't ended like that, but I understand why it did.

I look forward to reading what you come up with next to go along with the new episodes.

Great job and keep up the excellent work! :D

I cried. That only happens to me with very good fanfics. And I thinks that's enough to say. Thanks for this story.

Hm...I was actually kinda looking forward to House as a dad. Ah, well, I understand it all.

I love how you're managing to end it now without really having it too fast or dragging it out. Poor Cuddy and the miscarriage. I supposed I can't sympathize. If I ever wanted a child, I'd always rather adopt because there are enough children in the world without me making another. But still, the emotion - you kinda make people feel it and all, even though this is from House's perspective.

Keep up the great work!

~Nyxie~

"sighs" I feel happy because this was so beautiful and I LOVED the ending(cries for Cuddy though :() but I also feel so sad cuz this wonderful story ends here...
Thank you for sharing with us.Hope to read another fic of yours pretty soon... :)

I'm so, so sorry.

I'd like to give a fuller review...but to do so just seems flippant and wrong. You stated that you have some experience with this particular outcome, and that overshadows anything I could or would say about your writing and this story.

Once again, I'm so very sorry.