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LianFex
2008-02-01
ch 1,
abuseLOL! Wonderful! You wrote it well! Awesome job!

~Lian
ArtStar
2007-11-25
ch 1,
abusei love it :]
Travian sez
2007-11-18
ch 1,
abuseIt's a cute little story :) this pairing is cute. I actually belived that it was meant to be Shin/Hachi in the end due to Hachi's comments about him being a cute boy and Shin's comments about missing her. Well, the Takumi-bastard got her instead :P Yuck.

Anyway, write some more with the pairing will ya? There are far too little Shin/Hachi on
Felix Catharsis
2007-10-20
ch 1,
abuse"zomg that would be a cute pairing!" is right. :) they are ADORABLE, so thank you for writing this tons. your writing is cute and neat, and i like it. bunches.

haha, thanks for writing.
Hanazono Karin
2007-10-20
ch 1,
abuseYou should write more Nana fics, preferably Shin x Hachi.
You're really good at it.
usagi okashi
2007-09-30
ch 1,
abusei must say, this is some of your best work.

i've always pondered what the [ hachi x shin ] pairing would be like, and you just illustrated it. although it is light on the romance, i think it's absolutely amazing how you described it. it's descriptive, honest, and it has shin all over it. although you didn't quite grasp his character exactly, i think that you've got the gist of it.

you should write more NANA fiction.
Ongaku Neko
2007-08-16
ch 1,
abuseAAW! That was so cute! You wrote it really well and I was so happy to see a Shin and Nana fanfic! I was starting to feel weird for liking this couple and not knowing anyone else who did, hehe. *favs*
yonjuunana
2007-08-13
ch 1,
abuseVery cute pairing, I agree. Hope you write more stories for them. Good job!
nukeru
2007-08-13
ch 1,
abuseI'm happy to know I wasn't the only one who thought they would make a cute pairing because of that episode! I love them as mother and son, but I also love them as lovers. They're my two favorite characters in Nana. I hope you write more like this. What a great oneshot.
x0SilverFeathersx0
2007-08-09
ch 1,
abuseI think it was totally wise for you to have Shin insert that 'mother' part, as it kept him in character, and all.

This was short and sweet, and I loved it.
skinnieminnie
2007-08-09
ch 1,
abusewow its very well written and its great how the characters stayed true to the story i love it!
dedanaan
2007-08-07
ch 1,
abuseThis is cute. I like the Shin/Hachi dynamic and you've captured the moment well.
Adnexus Confatalis
2007-08-05
ch 1,
abusewow! ur good at writing, im surprised u don't have more reviews, that makes me sad T-T..&..angry!...but anyway...its realy good so far, don't get discouraged by the lack of reviews, kay? ^_^
Miss. Miyazawa
2007-07-07
ch 1,
abuseShin is one of my favorite characters, Hachi is one of my favorite characters. Put those two together and... it's cute! Haha, sorry for my corniness. You displayed a nice in-characterness all throughout the fic. When Shin lies beside Nana and thinks about strawberry milk and hazelnut cream... For some reason, I really liked that part.

Of course Shin's and Nobu's drunken antics were nice (you can't lie, Shin-chan... You're drunk! ^^). And Yasu was the mature, stoic observer as always. Kudos on the nice plot and IC-ness.
Kira Kurisaki
2007-07-04
ch 1,
abuseLOVED IT! Love Shin! Love this Episode! Thank-you for writing this!
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