I love the story when is your next chapter,hey read mine I just put up chapter one.

Wow! That was a long chapter. I like the 3rd scene where the two girls went to the shop to trade a large pearl for two beach dresses and it's pretty funny where the shopkeeper says, "Those were two strange girls." I'm looking forward to Chapter 13.

I love the beginning part of this chapter where Karen, Noelle, and Coco showed up. And then a freaky letter hasn't been written and sent by Luchia, Lina, and Hanon after Karen, Noelle, and Coco got the message from the capital mer-kingdom. Oh... I wonder who sent that letter? It's quite a mystery. Great chapter, ArcticWhisper!

My favorite part of this chapter is when the 3 mermaids(Luchia, Lina, and Hanon) are in disbelief that they are going to get new weapons for the upcoming future battles. *laughs* I can't wait to read what happens next when they get new powers. My favorite quote from Train Heartnet(from the Anime, Black Cat): I've come to deliver some bad luck. Great chapter, ArticWhisper.

Nice job building the sespense so far! I liked this chapter and I'm really getting into the story. Sorry it took so long for me to review but time hasn't been on my side as of lately lol. Argh, you leave us with another evil cliffhanger! I hope that you update soon so we can see what's going to happen next.

Wow! I hate to this but, "Cat Fight!" L.O.L.! What a sibling rivalry between Izuna and Aphrodisa. Pretty good humor between these two, ArcticWhisper! This chapter kinda reminds me of an anime I've seen on DVD called Angel Tales where 12 beautiful girls(angels) who were once animals cared for by a young man named Goro Mutsumi and all 12 of those girls are fighting each other over their master Goro. Again, great chapter, ArcticWhisper! I'm very sorry for putting any anime references to these reviews. It makes me wanna remember the similarities in anime.

lol! Love the ending. Caren, Noel and Coco are funny(Did I guess right? XD). Coco acts like she's on something. lmao!

Wow. Lina, Luchia, and Hanon trying to regain their singing voices? This kinda reminds me of an anime called Chance Pop Session where Yuki, Akari, and Nozomi trying to become like their singing idol Reika. This chapter really is a cliffhanger. I love it. Great chapter, ArcticWhisper.

This chapter is LOVELY! LOL! I love the part where Saphiro chases after Izuna and gets his face slammed into the kitchen door. Pretty good humor! I love it, Arctic Whisper.

First off sorry for taking so long to review this chapter, but time has not been on my side recently. But here I am now, so on to the review. I thoght this chapter was pretty funny, the idea that the mermaids needed singing lessions was a good idea since they hadn't really sang in so long. Izuna is quite intolerant of the girls (especially Hanon) for some reason, and she seems to come off as quite arrogant (at least to me). Argh, you leave us with a cliffhanger! Who is the new girl? Hm, let's see pink hair might make her related to Lucia. Guess I'll have to wait till you update to find out. Cya then!

Nice chapter! Your story is really starting to come alive. Nice job! Sorry for not having reviewed the last chapter. I did read it and enjoyed it a lot, but somehow I must have forgot to review it. Anyway, I can't wait to see what's going to happen in the next chapter. Cya then!

Awesome chapter! Just watch your spelling. You misspelled alot of the names. Lina=Rina Luchia=Lucia Nicola=Nikora

Sorry for being so picky, but that's how their names are really spelled.

Otherwise, it's really good.

I just finished reading both chapters 4 and 5 anl I loved both! This is really developing into a really good story! Now you've begun to introduce us to the dark side of things. I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter to see what's gonna happen. Cya then!

Yay! you updated. Good chapter. A little short, but that didn't stop me from enjoying it like short chapters usually do. Can't wait to see what happens next. lol! Can you please R&R my MM fic, Challenges? Thank you!

-Amanda-

Yeah, that was the best chapter yet! Your story is really starting to come together. I really liked reading this chapter, it was well written, nicely discriptive and very entertaining. I can't wait to read the next chapter! Cya then.