This is so sad :( Especially Yuni's words to him. I really look forward to reading the rest of your fic involving them so I can understand why she felt like this. :(

I also like how you had Hidan think of Yuni looking up at the same stars at him. :arg This was short and sweet/sad.

This better not be the end. I swear. I noticed the faint possibility of her death not coming because Zetsu didn't eat her and they didn't extract her bijuu as of yet. So I'm going to assume that now Hidan has to go through with the chakra channeling for 6 days straight and watch her suffering the entire time?

Yes, I'm onto you >)

I hope? xD

I like this chapter! It's interesting to see Hidan having a reflective, thoughtful moment, since that's a side of him that we never really get to see in canon.
It seems like you're taking requests for this fic, so could you possibly do a chapter about Pein and Konan? (They're kind of my new OTP...)
--Akatsuki210

Man, another sad drabble series. You need to write happy ones too!

Yay, another cool fic from you! I really liked both chapters. Especially the last line of the Gaara drabble, and the twist at the end of the SasuSaku one. Nice job!