This is a rare find on ff. Evocative and emotional without beingsentimental, and that's a fine line, indeed.

Minimal typos, too.

You display raw talent, visceral and edgy, well beyond your years. Polish it with experience, expand upon it, and you'll go far.

Really good fic...but the song is originally by Leonard Cohen, Jeff Buckley just did an excellent cover

Fantastic song...meaningful fic.