Love it can't wait till Pan meets Inuyasha and co. :D

lol cute, update soon

Great Story!

Oh what a sad loney life you have. Every one wants to be mean to you. Except that one person whos first submission was nice. Haha I felt the need to comment on my on story. Sorry me just being silly and not writing chapters like I should be as I said hard classes will make more chapters soon during summer break. ha haha!

I LOVE THE CONCEPT OF A DBZ/INU CROSSOVER I'VE ACTUALLY BEEB FIDDELING WITH THE IDEA MY SELF BUT WAS GOING TO DO A G/V AND MAKE VIDEL AND KOGOMA COUSINS AND HAVE GOHAN AND VIDEL SENT BACK IN TIME FROM BULMAS LAB I WOULD REALLY LOVE TO SEE WERE YOUR FIC ENDS UP THOUGH SO DO ME A FAVOUR AND DON'T JUST STOP WRITING IT. I HATE IT WHEN I GET INTO A FIC AND IT JUST STOPS GETING UPDATED OR GETS DISCONTINUED.

Please update soon.

interesting please update soon.

O_O THat was really random.

It's kinda...random. And it leaves me wondering what I just read.

Now this person is a genius. Hopefully the link shows up.

the storie is good just that it has some grammar errors other than that it's good.

This is way too short to start a story. You should have waited until you had more content to post anything. You basically posted a summary. That's a really lame thing to do. It wastes time and doesn't give the reader any insight as to what the story is like. Please don't do this again.