Wow, the first time I read this, it was about two years ago . I loved this fic back then, and I still do . I don't know how to explain, but this fic is like, absolutely IN character . There's no other way to put it . But I didn't really get the part when you said "How many times did he put his hand underneath her shirt, pressing her taunt body against his, before she'd slapped him and say the same thing?" . Are you implying that Ryoma actually did that? Because I don't think he would . But nonetheless, I loved this story, a great read .

Good job . :)

SQUIRMY BUG YOUR FUNNY HEHE
i seem to be a sucker for some cheesy stories sorry hehe

Good story. The part with the Ponta was so cute!

Oh, Ryoma, Ryoma, Ryoma. I'm not so sure how I should respond to his behavior--it's startlingly caveman-esque, and Sakuno's wobbly character usually makes my feminist wiles rage--but this was an enjoyable read nonetheless. They're both so teenage it hurts.

One point of confusion. This sentence: "How many times did he put his hand underneath her shirt, pressing her taunt body against his, before she'd slapped him and say the same thing?" There's some tense disagreement. You say either "she had slapped him and SAID the same thing," which would imply that the boy had been continually harassing her and this kiss just took it too far; or, "she WOULD slap him and say the same thing," which would mean that the boy routinely got hit by Sakuno for his lechery.

Otherwise, your fic was a very enjoyable read--you made me even enjoy knuckle-dragging caveman behavior (but hey, since it's Ryoma, I suppose it's alright; he get's away with being an arrogant ass, after all, and people--like me, paradoxically enough--love him to bits for it). Hee.

I love how Ryoma is so possessive.
xD
And cocky.
And arrogant.
And extremely suave.

That is why I love RyoSaku fics.
They're to die for <3

Concept was REALLY cute and sweet. Idea was unique. Execution of writing was a little wobbly --some of the grammar and wording was a little confusing.

Otherwise good job! Keep writing!

aw that was funy and cute. ^^ I especially like the ending, hehe. ^^

Yay! I liked this fanfic. It characterized Ryoma very well. Enjoyable read~
Keep Writing!!

luv it...very much!^^ tnx for making this story...i mostly liked their kissing scene!^^~

nice story... really liked it... good work...

That's SO him! I'm currently reading the manga, and you have him spot on ! Good job!

(and now, the helpful part--please watch the word 'taut'. It can easily be typed as 'taunt', and I've read that hundreds of times. Every time I see it, it makes me wince. 'Taut' is tight, 'taunt' is to tease maliciously, good to use in some instances, but not so much when applied to innocent Sakuno.)

Again, fantastic writing job, great characterization, good length. It was a memorable read. Thanks for posting.

i loved it!

wow. 0.0

omg so cute
lol
its funny how ryoma answered 'no' for sakuno and she didnt say anything

wah! how cute!


i love it!


it's really cute!


go for many ryosaku fanfics!


hahahah! gambatte! heeheeh..,


you inspired me a lot! ahahahahah!


tnx 4 the nice fanfic! nyahahahahah!


but i hope u would add the seigaku tennis club regulars!!


'coz i love them! especially eji ang fuji! aheeheeh.,


so... sayonara!! and pls. add me in frndstr.,


+ arigatou!