I'm in in a state of shock.
That was amazingly written. I'm serious. Every single line, I was pulled in. Every emotion Marian had, I felt for her.
Now, this is a amazing fic. You did wonders, and I love it.
I think this is so true to Marian's character and you wrote it beautifully.
Marvelous work!
.heart.angel.

oh my, that story was, amazing, i love the way you showed her fear of him in such a vulnerable way, and the ending where your not sure whether or not its Robin or Guy. It was beautiful written, definately a favorite!

Wow... excellent story!! It... wow... I just- I have no words. Obviously. You've captured Guy's sadistic character perfectly. Thank you!

Great Story!

that was great please write another chapter please

That was fantastic! I loved it. Please write a sequel. I'm just BURSTING to know who's at the door!

OH!! Who is there? Is it Gisborne? Is it Robin? Please don't just let it be her father. Please, continue your story. I'd love to read more. I'm obsessed with a good Robin/Marian oriented romance/drama, and this is a fine start...

Woop! Fab 1st chapter :-D Is it a continuing? (hint hint)
Jess
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