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Reviews For: Running Late

SxL
2007-07-02
ch 1,
abuseVery cute. Liked it a lot.
Iwata-Hatori
2007-07-02
ch 1,
abuseHi there.
What a refreshing story. The dialogues are funny, such an enjoyable breakfast.
Please go on! Merci. :)
OTP
2007-07-01
ch 1,
abuselol nicely done sweet
Sheo Darren
2007-07-01
ch 1,
abuseSugary cute and fluffy as always! And now my day is complete. :)

-> he came face to face with one of his worst enemies. And no, he wasn’t talking about Bradley. (Although Bradley outside his apartment building, waiting for him, was both scary and disturbing mind you.)

lol Nice bit of humor there!

-> “He must be lucky to have someone like you waiting patiently like this.”

Aw...

-> I'll probably need a beta-reader. Hahaha. JESS...where are you D:

AW... Wawa ang Eina-chan ko... Want me to beta-read for you? ^_^

More, please!
Bizzy
2007-07-01
ch 1,
abuseThat was very cute =D I loved it! I also thought it was pretty in character.

I liked the choppyness; it suited what was going on.
jacksparrow589
2007-07-01
ch 1,
abuseTOO CUTE! I happen to like fluff. A lot. This one was awesome!
causmicfire
2007-07-01
ch 1,
abuse:D It's nice that they can have their times when nothing else matters.
winglessfairy25
2007-07-01
ch 1,
abuseWell, this is interesting. Something I haven't read before. (duh?! haha) Anyways, that was really sweet. They were not OOC. you captured them really well. You did a great job and keep it up!

Erinn~

PS: i'm looking forward to your next updates.
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