...i'm STILL speechless, i can't believe what an amazing writer you are!... that whole reincarnation/don't-miss-him-again plot was so perfect... and beautifully executed.

I don't know why this story doesn't have more reviews, it's the most beautiful and intelligently-written one I've read to date.
"Am I broken?"
That sentence made the whole story. :)
gorgeous writing, congratulations!

*claps* Domo arigauto for the helpless Shinobu *Tears of Joy* auggh that was great

AUGH is that it NO that was so great a bit confused when you first switched persons but that was great

>timid voice

>timid voice

I like your portrayal of the characters. Great interaction.

*cries* That was beautiful! Fantastic job on this.....

I have to say my favorite part of this was Shinobu all weak and helpless! X_x If Nagisa'd been there she'd be in heaven. Luckily she wasn't cause it leads to Mitsuru being in heaven *_* Snuggle him Mitsuru!! I liked it quite a bit. Shun is good at being sneaky X_x

Aw - so glad you finished this one! I'm a sucker for soulmates, I must admit, and Mits and Shi do seem to fit so well together. Will have to check out your other new ones!

wow! you are amazing, you've captured each character's personalities perfectly and i'm intrigued as to whether Shinobu and Mitsuru will get together :)
more plz!
nak
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Wow... this is one of the first Greenwood fics I've ever read, and... it's very good... ^_____^

I vote for another part! Onegai? This fic is really lovely! I was so glad to see you had written another part! I don't check the Greenwood section often enough, I guess because I just noticed it, but this part was wonderful! I love the way you write Shinobu and Mitsuru! The dialogue was perfect too! Thank you so much for continuing and I can't wait to read more!

That was EXCELLENT!!! I love your characterizations. Please finish.

Hi Hoshiko! *I*'d personally like to see another part (just to get a fuller sense of completion, and also because I'm a sucker for M&S), but I don't think you left off at a bad place. I've been looking forward to the continuation of this since you posted the first chapter. Good job! ^_^