 cagna 2009-11-10 . chapter 5will they ever figure out that he faked his death? please update soon |
 itachigurlsaiyaku 2009-11-07 . chapter 5Beautiful. |
 ani 2009-10-30 . chapter 5just read it clear through and WOW! a major exception to my 'i hate crossovers' rule. i mean really, this actually works, everyone's in chara, the twists and changes work for both original lines. it's amazing! ;DD
and even though the gate scene in beginning implies ed doesn't have his auto-mail, i'm glad you left it there. just the thought of any wizards reaction to it... and using the gate to explain ed's knowledge of not only 'modern' time but the wizarding world too might seen like the easy way out, but it works on so many levels. the first day of class was hilarious, i could so see ed barging in like that.
it's been a while since you worked on this, and i know what it's like to loose your mojo, you're definitely going on alert! |
 BrokenBloodDrops 2009-10-21 . chapter 5The story was great but the interlude was quite sad... It's been a pleasure reading your story. |
 Spoon1234 2009-10-06 . chapter 5 This story is really interesting and original in my opinion. I liked the flashback chapter, Al's really cute as an infant and Ed's gleeful transmutation of gold is hilarious when I try to picture that in my mind. It's sad to hear you won't be continuing the plotline, but I do hope your one-shot with the discovery that Ed is still alive will be posted (forgive me if it was posted and I didn't see it...). Can I have a little hope you'll start writing this again? =D |
 sakura oni chi 2009-10-02 . chapter 5sugoi! so amazing! very well written and an amazing plotline... I love it! I do hope you write more as I will be eagerly waiting the next chapter. |
 EdwardCullenIsCoolerThanYou 2009-09-30 . chapter 5I know you haven't updated in... um... 2 years on this story, but please do! Of course, if you don't want to, erm... |
 Arcellant 2009-09-28 . chapter 5Aw.
Really, I give much love to this story. I know you won't continue, so thanks for writing this much. |
 actionliker 2009-09-26 . chapter 5update update update! |
 nonana 2009-09-10 . chapter 5 This is really the first fma/hp fic I've ever read but I already consider this the best crossover fic I've seen!
I encourage you to continue this, please? I want to read more! |
 midnightwaters 2009-09-06 . chapter 5This is the best FMA/HP crossover ever. Really, you should continue this. It would be a sin not to. |
 Sweetly-Sour94 2009-09-02 . chapter 5i love it! Al is so cute! |
 Jewelle2 2009-08-26 . chapter 5I like this story and do hope that you will continue writing it and update soon. |
 the-ice-cold-alchemist 2009-08-22 . chapter 1aw als first word! lol |
 AdventureAddict 2009-08-15 . chapter 5WOW.
This is one of the BEST FMA/HP crossover fics I have ever read. And somehow you managed to pull off the popular Al as a child setup in the same fic as well!
I love the style of your writing, simple and clean, and yet there's these great little moments where you add a little extra detail that makes me chuckle.
I don't usually make a point of checking when a story has last updated. That's why I got pouty when I checked yours and saw the "08" at the end of the date.
I really, really hope you update this. Because the style combined with the story totally makes my day.
...Well, and the adorableness that is tiny Al... :) |