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| xPhoenix0Returnx 2008-10-09 ch 5, | abuseHaha, I love Ed's character in this. He's a bit more mature than in the anime but he is older so one should expect him to grow up a bit. xD Al is very adorable. Every time he says something, I can imagine it and then I feel like glomping him. |
| punky 4 you 2008-10-08 ch 5, | abuseOhh, This was definetly something new! :O And I love it! I really like the way you write, and I love the storyline.. I've never read an HP/FMA crossover before! Hah! but anyway, really good, masterpiece, work, keep it up, and upload as fast as you can, without stress, ofc ^^ |
| aaattttackkkkk 2008-10-04 ch 5, | abuseWow, brilliant writing! I can't wait for more. Like how you've gotten to the interesting bits early (HP and co''s class). |
| aaattttackkkkk 2008-10-04 ch 2, | abuseHahahha, I love it! Beautiful Al, Ed and Dumble. Love the duel. |
| Kati 2008-10-01 ch 5, anon. | abuseOMG! i love this so much. can't wait for the next chapter! QUESTION... you are continuing this, right? i see that you haven't updated since january. You really should keep going. THE AWESOMENESS MUST CONTINUE! |
| roocullen 2008-09-24 ch 5, | abuseSO GOOD!! PLEASE UPDATE! I LOVE IT! |
| Jenni 2008-09-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseshoot. i forgot to put my email address on my last review. i've added it on this one. sorry about that! please respond to my questions! |
| Jenni 2008-09-22 ch 5, anon. | abuseOMG! this is my favorite fma fic! I loved the interlude... it made me sad for everyone who thinks Ed and Al are dead... I have a few questions. Does Ed actually know that people think he is Al's father. I can't remember if anyone had actually said that to his face yet... even if everyone does assume it. Also, are Ed and Al wearing robes? It hasn't been said what they are wearing, other than Ed's brown coat. Somehow I can't imagine him in wizards' robes. I keep thinking of him in that old fashioned suit he wore in the FMA movie... anyway, PLEASE UPDATE SOON! the suspense is killing me! |
| Ren 2008-09-21 ch 5, anon. | abuseI love it XD! The reasons for everything happening actually make sense with what is going on. And they are original! Most FMA crossover fics have Ed getting to where ever else by being trasported through the Gate. I love this version! I also though that the interlude was very touching... UPDATE SOON! ... please? ... I'll give you a cookie ... *runs off to go find a cookie* |
| yolen 2008-09-16 ch 1, | abuseThis is an awesome story. There is so much potential, and I realy look forward to seeing what you'll do with it. Please update it. |
| Kaioma 2008-09-15 ch 5, | abuseYou rock my socks, blanket and stupid physics lab... damn physics... XD |
| Blah 2008-09-14 ch 5, anon. | abuseThat was really good; I love the whole idea of Al being a child (physically, at least). Please update soon! |
| epobbp 2008-09-12 ch 1, | abuseoh please update soon! This is an amazing fic |
| A Bibliophile 2008-09-12 ch 5, | abuseI am in love with this story. I have read an re-read it half a dozen times. Please keep it up! I liked the memorial to Ed at the end of this chapter. I have noticed that a lot of authors seem to forget that things are changing while the main character is off doing things. I am kind of hoping someone from Amestris will come to Hogwarts, or another place Ed frequents and Ed will be scrambling to keep them from finding out about him. The omake with Al was hilarious. Poor Al. Why won't they leave your amazing cuteness alone? ^_^ With this final comment I will stop my rant and hope you update soon. You are awesome! This story is the amazingest! |
| GreatBigCranberries 2008-09-11 ch 5, | abuseWow, this story is really good! |