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Torasoru
2008-03-30 . chapter 3
This is so cute! x]
If only this was for real. ;]
Ahahas.
Seena58
2007-07-20 . chapter 14
-brain explodes- Maybe I should give up already. This is already too ridiculous to laugh at -picks up pieces of brain-

Before, After: ♥ ♥ ♥ Love. It was... just... love. -brain promptly died just before the end- (And Jin is a bit of a nut, isn’t he? They both are XD)

... And have I ever told you that I love you? ♥
Seena58
2007-07-20 . chapter 15
-kicks WTFBBQCHICKENMAN -kicks it again, before finishing the rest of the review- Okay, from where it was cut off...

... (again, you have left it to us to decide XO) about the small fraction of time the other has been gone in comparison to how long they’ve known each other. I guess that works on how important someone is, but you don’t know until they’re gone... or something.

- Eternity: This is beautiful. Just... how it’s set out. Short and sweet, and just there, with the promises to a new beginning and the life after this one ends. A time when they just watch as time passes by... and, uh... it just is. Just is –nods to self–

- Six Bites: MINDLESS FLUFF. Fluffy. Yes. And I am highly amused by the idea of watching Michiru running around in a panic, while screaming for help and Jin just sits by and watches. I need to stop being so amused about these things, otherwise my head is going to explode from it all. Still... fluffy. Good. Uh... yeah :D

- Descent: I love the description in this one. It’s just so wonderful, the comparisons and the reality and... well, everything. (Damn, I’m probably repeating myself and going around in circles now) It’s always interesting to see that side of them and... uh... yes –slightly brain-dead-

- Cycle: Mm, yeah, love the idea of this one. The description of the colours used made it even better and the development between them is love :D And the ending made me happy too, of course, with the promise of continuation.

- Before, After:
Seena58
2007-07-20 . chapter 16
... Writing reviews in huge, bulk-like slabs. It’s fun.

- Twenty-four: This was definitely interesting (despite our general knowledge that maths is the root of evil and so forth) and it makes you think. Just... what it means and how it obviously has some sort of reasoning behind why one would care so much (again, you have left it to us to decide >_
Seena58
2007-07-11 . chapter 10
*now watch me type the rest. Like... ha-ha-semi-delusional type-ness (no, I'm not making any sense here... maybe you should just ignore me)*

But before that, let's just face the sad, sad fact out here, on this particular fandom: the one pairing anyone will read if KazunexKarin, because it's canon and all that junk, and it seems that the majority of this place is, well, just that (and maybe I'll just be mean one day and have KxK in the summary, and have it as a KirioxKarin/KirikaxKarin/KirioxKirika (well, I wouldn't mind a fluff-type love between the twins *shrugs* I guess... it would be family love)/KazusaxKarin/I think you get the picture fic, just so... well, I don't know what. Maybe I'll just be feeling mean/suicidal). I mean, your writing is so beautiful and extremely well-written, it's just that no one seems to like crack-pairings in this place. This is obviously a mix of compliment and me ranting about it, and I doubt this section will really reach the point where there are enough fans to support the loveliness of crack-couplings. Not that it will actually stop us. ...Yes. I'm done now. /stupid, semi-pointless rant

-Beautiful: okay, first... I love that part about Karin being herself (don't really know why. Maybe I like it when people are in pain?) and just the fact that Michiru is sick but fought on to live a little bit longer to be with Jin, it's just... well, it's really heart-breaking, even if reality is like that. And it was a lovely piece of writing, with the right emotion, and ending.

-Messed-Up: haha... Jin prattling XD And what can I say? I love it. Really, I do. Since he probably has the world's most insane family out there (only to have Miyon and Yuuki along for the ride makes it all the more enjoyable) it all makes sense. I also found the line "[...] I’m not sure I would marry me if I knew what my family was like beforehand." entertaining as well :D (in a couple of years, when the children start popping up, it's going to be even more fun XD) Ah, family XP

-Finished: I care about who's talking >_< But then again, it doesn't really matter, seeing as it can be applied to either. Although I have the feeling that Michiru is probably the more likely of the two to actually take up writing; maybe it's because I just feel that Jin is more focused elsewhere in terms of projects *shrugs* It's sad, though, but still wonderful to read and... well, yes. (I guess it's the whole thing that, in reality, there really isn't a 'happily ever after'; there's always going to be hardship/pain, well, everywhere)

-Welcome: (Oh, you know a shack would make a great place to live, 24/7 all year 'round XD) LOVE. Uh... yeah. LOVE. *lost for words/any form of remaining intelligence* ♡ LOVE.
Seena58
2007-07-11 . chapter 6
*watch me attempt to type reviews in bulk... ish... er, something (in threes, except... I still have four left, so...)* Yeah, let's see now...

-drift: *stares* I'm fairly sure my brain died somewhere, during this (in a good way) and it was so... amazing. It's interesting to see the seasons pass by, the change and everything. Winter, especially, and the end of it, the memory/remembering; it's kind of sad, really. I've probably missed something here, but I still enjoyed it.

-Forgotten: I can't help but love reading this one. It's nice and short, summarising what he sees, or what he can't see. (And let's face it, memories are weird, weird things in the end) Or maybe I just like the visual of the swinging pendulum, especially with how it's been shown in the opening. Hrm... yeah.

-Freedom: Ah, well, you know. Dialogue and character interaction is always good, and it's nice to know that Michiru has a habit of ripping people's hair out (actually, wait, no, that's not it). It's just... pretty. (And makes you think, I guess, but when have I ever done that?)
MICCHI.IS.MINE
2007-07-10 . chapter 10
I can't believe this story is not popular. I have read all the chapters, and your writing is very beautiful. On chapters 'Why?' and 'Insides', I almost cried ^.^ but hey, I'm a sap, so who cares?

Anyway, your writing is beautiful. I can't wait for all 100 chapters to be up. I'll be waiting!

Mucho love,
MICCHI.IS.MINE
Seena58
2007-07-05 . chapter 2
LIEKOMGYOUFAILED ;_; I'MTHATONEPERSONREADINGTHIS

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You know I love you (oh, and can't forget the writing, of course), but since I've already left my ramblings on lj, it seems kind of ridiculous to say the exact same thing here.

...

Maybe we can just keep foolishly hoping that one day, there will be more JinxMichiru fans. It's kind of sad as it is >_> *continues to attempt to brainwash everyone else*
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