Wow. . . That was a great read

Wow, you are a very gifted author. Amazing writing.

This is totally one of my favorite fics! Great job!

Wow. That was so angsty and very good!

please write a sequal. this was great!

-bri

Wow. Wow. And believe me when I say it again, wow. You are, by far, the greatest and most professional writer I've seen on fanfiction.

When I first read this, I thought this was just another Zutara smut fic, but when I actually read it, I was even more blown away.

It's the writing itself, the character's emotions, the everything. I completely, one hundred percent, with all my heart, loved it.

And that's saying something considering the fact that I never review.

a misunderstanding love between them D: very good plot

this is the saddest, best-written zutara i have ever read.

thank you.

DaniMarie

Love it :)

it's as simple as that lol.

Wow. Nice. Beautiful. Very much enjoyed the use of present tense, and the changes in tone... everyone very much IC.

I have read this story a thousand times, and I never ceases to amaze me. It's really incredible, and I agree completely with Fallin' From Grace. No sequel is needed to this. (Although we certainly wouldn't mind more awesome writing.) There is enough Zutara in this story alone to make the whole Zutarian ship just die in complete happiness. And yes, you guessed right, I am a devoted Zutarian). You have sufficiently made my head spin from the number of times I was almost wishing it would happen. (Almost. I'm still going on the whole 'Zutara will live through Zuko becoming Fire Lord' thing.) I commend you and tell you to give yourself a pat on the back. - Wonderful writing)

Unlike everyone else, I am going to tell you not to write a sequel. This was so brilliant that it doesn't need a sequel, and continuing it isn't neccessary. Not to mention I might die from the sheer "awesomness." I love how the emotions were conveyed and your descriptive writing.

Exceptionally thrillingly amazingly wonderful. Simply breath-taking. The play of emotions written was chillingly well-written and portrayed so... beautifully. I'm terribly in love with Zuko's character in this story. Currently, I'm quite tongue-tied and for some reason, shivering in my stomach. You really captured the raw anger, hurt, hate, want, need and unrequited love, especially with the last line. Wonderfully delivered. So happy to have read this story.

very nice work

Your story is very well written. You have great promise as a writer.