 counter-intuitive 2009-11-22 . chapter 5Haha, funny stuff. When people make Naruto an uke, he really does get OOC'd the hell out of. |
 Lights Romance 2009-10-16 . chapter 5Lol this is all so true :) Konoha High School, the name calling of teme and dobe, everything. This is one of the funniest fanfictions I've ever read xD |
 MagentaDusk 2009-09-20 . chapter 5ROFLMFAO~! hahaha i couldn't breathe from laughing so damn hard from all these fics you write. lmao~ i'm glad i'm not the only one who notices this corny overly-used shite~! :D
my mom thought i was nuts from laughing to much. thankies for writing this! ^_^ |
 Mondo-Bongo 2009-09-07 . chapter 5Woman, have my children. So when we die, we'll die happily knowing the world is left in capable hands.
Now, let me fish my brain out of the iffy gutter and leave an actual review... *10 hours later* Ah, ready!
Okay, honestly, I don't really click on parody/spoof fan fictions too much because they tend to be... well not funny, boring, and end up being the very thing they're supposed to be criticizing. . But yours is the opposite; it had me laughing the whole time, it contained universal truths (Nothing matters in fan fiction) and quite possibly the most thoughtful plots ever (A very weak attempt at humor/sarcasm by my brain at 12:34am, sorry). It also had some of the best lines ever. LIke "...and they had lots and lots of strange looking fox-cat babies. Most of them died though. It was kinda sad." That one had me reeling with laughter. THanks for brightening up my (very early) day! |
 Xtreh 2009-05-25 . chapter 5lol, i love this story xD
How about...
Naruto: Uwaah! I hate you Sasuke!
Sasuke: [overly long speach of how he's loved Naruto ever since he first saw him]
Naruto: Oh my god, I've just had a sudden change of heart and realized that I love you too! And that my hatred of you was just an act! And act, I tell you, an act!!
Sasuke: *smirks* yay. *kisses*
Naruto: *moans*
*both die while having sex* |
 Mab 2009-04-18 . chapter 5 okay, you are dey best! I mean I know that all the fanfics are amazingly cliche but who knew that someone could actually make fun of them in such an amusing way. SasuNaru always rocks but this was a really good laughs. Oh! do the rich sasuke/poor naruto one. Also, aren't naruto and Sasuke sometimes orphans and Naruto pretty stupid and always called 'blonde' and such. Even 'urutosukachi' seems to fit him and yes, I love the 'hn' cliche story! thx for writing this! |
 Chimalim 2009-03-25 . chapter 5 lol. as much as i love all of these cliches i absoloutly love it when people make fun of them. i don't know i guess i'm weird like that but please write more. they make me laugh. |
 sasodei-iz-awesome 2009-03-13 . chapter 5Runaway uh... Well One runs away and ONE doesn't!! :D One finds the other and then... Yeah i dunno they just have smex I guess. XD THIS IS GENIUS BY THE WAY!! I cracked up EVERY chappie.
Peace, love, and all that shit...
~Sasodeiizawesome~ |
 UchihaAkimoto 2009-03-11 . chapter 1Now, this is awesome! xD |
 poke-the-kitty 2009-01-04 . chapter 5If I could quote something from this chapter I'd just end up pasting the entire chapter in here, so that would kinda defeat the purpose. That's how much I loved this fic. Especially the end line, GENIUS!!
You must hurry and write more chapters. :D |
 poke-the-kitty 2009-01-04 . chapter 4Okay that line' "Sasuke was a jock. The mean kind, he stole things from homeless people" had me in stitches. I worship the ground you walk on.
Now I want to write a large number of cliched fics...but then I'd be copying you. IN actual fact I'm far to lazy to devote time to writing out a large number of cliched fics, so you really have nothing to worry about. :D |
 poke-the-kitty 2009-01-04 . chapter 3LMAO. *dies laughing*
I love the overly cliched vampire fic. I love where Sasuke cut his arm so much it came off. I love how Naruto got tetanus and started working in McDonald's, I love everything about this. |
 poke-the-kitty 2009-01-04 . chapter 2I love this. Particularly the fact that Sasuke forgot to let the class go early and now all those students have to gouge out their eyes. XD |
 poke-the-kitty 2009-01-04 . chapter 1AH HA HA HA HA HA.
I command you to go read my Mpreg fic. I think you'll enjoy the crack ficedness of it. |
 DaCheezeBurgerz 2009-01-02 . chapter 5 Dobe means 'Dead last' in japanese. We love the stories, we were cracking up!! |