I have to admit, out of all of the Lloyd x Genis fan-fictions that have been published on this site, I would have to say that this one is by far one of my favorites. This story has a very nice feel to it, it’s told in a very honest and loving way. I found that while reading it in your first person perspective for Lloyd , it was very believable in terms to how he spoke and acted compared to the game. You kept very true to character ; even with the briefly mentioned, and turned their affections into something truly beautiful and pure. For claiming to not write another over PG-13 in rating, I have to say this turned out very well. Yaoi lemon’s are normally very blunt or written to vaguely, and the attention that that you paid here in description, and not being too shy to type what you meant (rather than sugar-coating it like most people do) is refreshing . Reading this fan-fiction for me was just as good as seeing a visual presentation of it. I hope that you will consider writing more Lloyd x Genis fictions in the future, because you definitively show mastery with the characters and confidence in your writing. :]

it was awesome i love the pairing of genis and Lloyd

Great :D very effective. Nice use of imagery for the setting and characters to really make
this seem very real. I even like the way you used some lines from the game XD. Thanks for a great story, I'll be looking forward to reading your stuff in the future :)
p.s. this is one of my favorite pairings ^^

Oh my god... LloydxGenis smut... Finally, someone makes it! :D I looked everywhere but could only find so little of the pairing, when it seems so obvious it should be cannon! And I love how you wrote the story, I see that actual effore and care went into this story unlike others where it goes "I shoved him into the room. I tore off his clothes. We made love. We went back outside."

Definite immediate favorite!

wowz ^_^ very nice!

Oh my goodness that was cute. Not just cute. Cho kawaii! ^.^ You DEFINETLY need to make a sequel! Or at least another Genis/Lloyd fanfiction! Definatly. I have no clue if I spelled that right...

LMAO! brilliant i love you!!

It's been a really long time since I last read a good, not-too-fluffy yaoi and this was exactly what I was looking for! Call me a perv, I am one :DD
Good work, keep it up!

Aww, that was so cute
I love these two together
Good work^^

Adorable!!
*sigh* Oh, the sweetness... It's enough to make you tear up...

Aww. That was probably the best bit of fluff and smutt I've read in quite a while. Wonderful balance! Characters were nice and accurate. Great job.

nice :] the way u described the characters makes them seem very real

Ah! Great, I loved it!

excellent, i loved it. i love how it wasnt too fast paced and the cuddling ^^ genis definitely seems like the cuddling type : )

That was so awesome I love this pairing better then the 'canon pairings' way better the Lloyd/Zelos although that is a good pairing too!